Reviews for Comeuppance
FreeloveZilpha chapter 1 . 7/13/2010
Wry and witty, and cleverly titled. Loved it.
DaniBanani78 chapter 1 . 6/30/2010
I would love to read more of this. mmmmm...It is great...
In.Between.The.Lines chapter 1 . 6/6/2010
THAT WAS BRILLIANT. Absolutely brilliant. I laughed soo hard...
susayq chapter 1 . 5/29/2010
ROFLMAO :)

~Susan
nmnnnnmm chapter 1 . 4/7/2010
does this imply Jasper was fucking Edward, too?
sherylb chapter 1 . 3/26/2010
Is it wrong if I found this to be totally HOT?
commasaywhat chapter 1 . 3/8/2010
OH my fucking shit! haha, if that last part means what I think it means, lol hahaha fucking shittastic! funny shit.
Iceblondie chapter 1 . 2/28/2010
that was cute and m
mudpuddledemon chapter 1 . 1/21/2010
When I first read the ending, I thought for a split second that Edward was the one Jasper fucked in his affair, and Bella was the one saying "If you can fuck him, so can I!" Which I think would be hilarious! But didn't fit at all with other stuff mnentioned, obviously. Very cute. Love the line about another beer while she's on her knees.
danni4jbj chapter 1 . 1/5/2010
nice twist!
A-SuperStar13 chapter 1 . 12/29/2009
Great job, such a bittersweet revenge.
dtav chapter 1 . 12/29/2009
Nice! Very nice! What I want to know is why is Bella always so lucky that she gets to have both of the hot guys? You know this was leading to a threesome. I'm jealous!
nnnnano chapter 1 . 12/21/2009
What a twist!
marigold123 chapter 1 . 12/18/2009
*snort, chuckle, gasp!* Loved it!

Thank you for writing!
TheGreatAli chapter 1 . 12/18/2009
Revenge is so sweet. Great job, although I think Bella found out a little more then she wanted to.

TheGreatAli
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