|Reviews for Gravity|
| Guest chapter 12 . 1/9/2013
Omg this almost made me cry it's so sweet!
| xionnevermore chapter 12 . 10/23/2012
Awww! This is amazing!
| xionnevermore chapter 6 . 10/23/2012
I feel like Axel sometimes. I desperately want to let people in, but at the same time I don't want to end up getting hurt.
| xionnevermore chapter 1 . 10/23/2012
Aww...this is so sad... :(
| duckie lover 151 chapter 12 . 7/30/2012
What an adorable ending! XD I would love to see a one-shot or something accompanying this to see Cloud's reaction to his son finally talking.
Great job! You're an awesome writer!
| duckie lover 151 chapter 11 . 7/30/2012
My only thought other than that, is that my dad would NEVER in a million years have let me stay over! XD And for exactly that reason!
| duckie lover 151 chapter 10 . 7/30/2012
I have to say, I almost feel guilty. :( Axel's story was so heroic... I was totally picturing him being some pyromaniac juvenile delinquent who'd set something on fire and regretted his ways after something went wrong and whatnot...
I'm glad Roxas was there for him. :) I didn't expect him to run away for a second! Now that it's all out and done with, I'm excited to see how they'll progress.
| duckie lover 151 chapter 9 . 7/30/2012
I loved the scene in the bathroom though I'm surprised Roxas was willing to be touched so soon after the attack. XD I loved Sora's threat though it seemed a little less threatening as he'd make Riku beat him up instead of just doing it himself.
I hope Axel can get over this wall he's built up...
| duckie lover 151 chapter 7 . 7/30/2012
Roxas's attack happened so fast. O.O But I guess that's what they say: what feels like forever can happen in just a few minutes. I'm glad he wasn't actually raped though.
I really liked reading Roxas's texts. He texts just like I do! Exactly what I'm feeling so that if I stutter or change my mind, my words will cut off mid-sentence! X)
XD I can totally see some really awkward scene where Cloud and Leon are wondering where Roxas is and they show up at Axel's house to find him sleeping in the bed of some boy they don't know! XD
| duckie lover 151 chapter 6 . 7/30/2012
There are so many things to say about this and I don't know how to say them! :(
Axel's reaction was understandable. I can't wait for the details on the fire when he finally opens up to Roxas. :)
| duckie lover 151 chapter 5 . 7/30/2012
For some reason, Roxas seems a lot more... open than I've first perceived him to be. Maybe I'd just assumed he was all closed off because he doesn't speak, but compared to Axel he actually seems fine.
| duckie lover 151 chapter 4 . 7/30/2012
Vexen always creeped me out, too... O.o And I can see why Axel didn't like him. He seemed really pushy. I'm not sure how to word this exactly... but Axel seems like the type who would like the group as long as they weren't all in therapy together. X)
I didn't see Roxas being in Axel's group therapy coming. It was a nice surprise. :) I'm so excited for them to get closer!
| duckie lover 151 chapter 3 . 7/30/2012
I like that you're going into both of their problems, and Roxas at least seems to be going in the right direction. It's kind of funny: Axel is pushing him back towards speech therapy indirectly, and I'm sure Roxas will be able to convice Axel to get help later on.
I also really liked the description of their family dinner. It just showed so well how loud Sora is compared to Roxas. :) I liked the contrast between the two.
| duckie lover 151 chapter 2 . 7/30/2012
Awww... I think it's kind of cute that they're both crushing on each other and Axel learned to read sign language for him.
| duckie lover 151 chapter 1 . 7/29/2012
XD What an odd set of parents! For both of them!
I really like this so far. I really like the CloudxLeon pairing, but I actually haven't read of lot of it, and the parts with young Roxas and Sora were so cute! I'm, like, spazzing from the cuteness! XD
Also, I really like the selective mutism idea... I actually had to do a school project on it, but I find it no less interesting.
I can't wait to see what comes next! (I'm predicting a bit of a time skip...)