Reviews for Even Numbers Have Better Balance
Daydreamishly chapter 1 . 7/2/2011
Simple, but I think necessary look into the metacrisis's psyche. Of course he's going to feel trapped into a life another has built for him. And I think it would give way to a sort of acceptance, but it would be a while before either Rose or he could process into that. You did a good job of presenting that metaphor through the single heart analogy, to the conclusion that the sacrifice of his independence came with the benefits of having someone at his side. Again, simple, but spoken with several layers of meaning that make it beautiful. Excellent work.
pipinheart chapter 1 . 12/18/2009
This is nice, lovely... Its nice that they are together, but wonder if Rose loves him for who he is and not who he looks like. It will be an interesting journey for him...
CountryGrl chapter 1 . 12/17/2009
Hmm, I liked that a lot. Very powerful. Great job. :]
Vaena chapter 1 . 12/16/2009
I like it. but i wish it was the real doctor that stayed with rose. I think its unfair he is all alone. BUt i guess its good for rose. but i love doctor and rose. not just the doctor. But anyway great story. cant wait for the rest! update soon!