Reviews for Dark Wishes
ummmmmmmmm chapter 3 . 2/28/2010
um ok finish the story will ya?
ali chapter 3 . 2/25/2010
yeah you posted the next chapter I hope you the next one soon bye.
Aero Paladin chapter 3 . 2/23/2010
AHH! MEAN, a cliffhanger? This chapter was worth the wait, and I shall eagerly await the next!
Alexia the hedgehog chapter 3 . 2/23/2010
Please,please,please update soon!Please!~God Bless!~
ali chapter 1 . 2/8/2010
what are you waiting for please continue it's awesomness please I can't take the suspense
ERiN OPPEL chapter 2 . 1/4/2010
Hi there! Sorry I haven't replied in a while; I was on vacation. Anyway, I think this is a cool story so far! :) It would be better if you start a new paragraph each time a different character talks or does something so that it would be easier to read, however. And watch your tenses (sometimes you switch from past to present). But the overall story is captivating and I can't wait to see what happens next with SHADDIE! SQUEE! - I love Shadow. for the huge mistake in the first chapter... Mephiles has gray stripes when he takes the form of Shadow's shadow, not green. Now where's my cookie?

Update soon, please! :D
kyosplosion chapter 2 . 12/30/2009
Mephiles! Yay! I called him the Sage of Cookies in my fanfic! XD Why I told you this, I have no idea. XD Oh, well. KEWL STORY! :D
ShadowthewhiteWolf chapter 2 . 12/27/2009
hm interesting

i wonder what mephiles has in his mind

*stands in front of a cockie: ,,do i take it or not?"
Aero Paladin chapter 2 . 12/24/2009
Please don't stop there, I really want to read more! I am looking forward to the next chapter.
Alexia the hedgehog chapter 2 . 12/24/2009
This chapter was definetly interesting, please update soon!
Alexia the hedgehog chapter 1 . 12/23/2009
Wow! I've got chills from reading this, please, please, please update soon!
Aero Paladin chapter 1 . 12/23/2009
Once I started reading this, I could not stop until I had finished. But when it ended, I wanted to read more! I am looking forward to future chapters, keep up the good work!
streetfighter246 chapter 1 . 12/18/2009
great story. I enjoyed it. I'm not very good with detail.
TelekineticFlames chapter 1 . 12/17/2009
I'm in love with this story lol. Keep up the great work and I hope to see more chapters in the future! )
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