um ok finish the story will ya?

yeah you posted the next chapter I hope you the next one soon bye.

AHH! MEAN, a cliffhanger? This chapter was worth the wait, and I shall eagerly await the next!

Please,please,please update soon!Please!~God Bless!~

what are you waiting for please continue it's awesomness please I can't take the suspense

Hi there! Sorry I haven't replied in a while; I was on vacation. Anyway, I think this is a cool story so far! :) It would be better if you start a new paragraph each time a different character talks or does something so that it would be easier to read, however. And watch your tenses (sometimes you switch from past to present). But the overall story is captivating and I can't wait to see what happens next with SHADDIE! SQUEE! - I love Shadow.

Hmm...as for the huge mistake in the first chapter... Mephiles has gray stripes when he takes the form of Shadow's shadow, not green. Now where's my cookie?

Update soon, please! :D

Mephiles! Yay! I called him the Sage of Cookies in my fanfic! XD Why I told you this, I have no idea. XD Oh, well. KEWL STORY! :D

hm interesting

i wonder what mephiles has in his mind

*stands in front of a cockie: ,,do i take it or not?"

Please don't stop there, I really want to read more! I am looking forward to the next chapter.

This chapter was definetly interesting, please update soon!

Wow! I've got chills from reading this, please, please, please update soon!

Once I started reading this, I could not stop until I had finished. But when it ended, I wanted to read more! I am looking forward to future chapters, keep up the good work!

great story. I enjoyed it. I'm not very good with detail.

I'm in love with this story lol. Keep up the great work and I hope to see more chapters in the future! )