|Reviews for Enter the Dragon|
| RavenclawDemigodOfAthena chapter 2 . 5/22
Wow. That's all I can say. Wow. I barely understood have of that but it was a really good story/play/script!
| swordworks chapter 2 . 4/28
Nice read, even if it was a little childish.
| Monster King chapter 2 . 4/15
Great story I really liked it a shame that you gave up on it.
| carick of hunter moon chapter 1 . 4/2
I look back at this and think I so hope that it gets finished one day
It a outsanding idea and easly be a story that would be count as one of the greats story of fanfiction
| anon chapter 2 . 3/16
Oh god, were those names mangled that badly in the source material?
Valiseyovich? Do you mean Васильевич/Vasilyevich, or however to transliterate it?
And Dracula's name wasn't Vladimir, it was Wladislaus, or Владислав/Vladislav in the original Slavonic.
Anyway, this whole «chapter» is a mess, but that could only be expected from a scratch version.
I really do like the concept of a draconic Harry Potter wrecking shithole world's shit with economic, scientific and engineering porn. And of course the revolution fuckery deserves something too, even if it's a touch gommunist for my taste.
| anon chapter 1 . 3/16
Harry Potter, but dragons.
Makes sense. So far, it's turned out better than I expected, although the large monochapter textwall makes it slightly inconvenient to read the footnotes.
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/7
I stopped reading when Snape laughed, bye.
| goblin81 chapter 2 . 12/22/2017
Having played SR i am absoluly loving your story. You were right when you said it was incomplete and un-bataed but using SR for a crossover is briliant. I look forward to seeing you polush it up and move forward.
| muumi2three chapter 1 . 11/9/2017
That chapter is so long that it has too much awesomeness in it to comment upon. But here is a partial list of Awesome Things in no particular order.
Snape in Instructive Mode (up at the Lair). The diction is his, to the life (and Upset Scottish McGonagall is pretty amazing too).
The sense of place. "Somewhere in the hinterlands on the west coast near Mallaig" works very well indeed with the story. I bet you get the weather right too. I have no clue what the weather near Mallaig is lik, but if you intend to tell us that unlike the west coast of Skye, snow falls vertically instead of horizontally, I'll believe you. That's how credible I find this story's background.
The train trivia.
The paean to the inherent magic of steam trains.
The tummy-lining that earned Gringotts a 9% increase in profits, and how that confounded Umbridge.
Harry's childlike interest in How To Be A Dragon and his misconceptions about the result of his research (he does pretty well with the damsel all things considered).
Bagginses and other baddies.
Have to cut it short
| The Third Biker Scholar chapter 1 . 11/6/2017
can't wait to read more!
| Vercalos chapter 2 . 10/21/2017
I have to say I enjoyed what was here and am sorry to see this abandoned.
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/1/2017
Harry in dragon form is just like Alphonse in his metal suit of armor.
Aww I wanna cuddle him!
| DBNY94 chapter 2 . 7/2/2017
Why does Harry talk and think like a moron? You spent all of last chapter talking up his love of reading and intelligence, so what is this? It's like he's got a learning deficiency
| DBNY94 chapter 1 . 7/2/2017
This is confusing. Is he intelligent and well read or not? Because you write his thoughts and dialogue similarly to Forrest Gump
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/1/2017
I read this a while ago and loved it! The very idea of Harry turning into a Dragon right before those things eyes was great. Unexpectedly Vernon was right about Harry. But only after, as per usual, their overly fat son attacked him. Also, as per usual, Bumbleohsomore has his head so far up his ass he can't see the real world. It's really not much of a surprise that he wants the magical world to improve extremely slow. Following his suppose timetable, the magical world of Great Britain would be somewhere around five or maybe even six centuries behind the muggle world. Your idea of Goblins not having much magic is so different from any other I've read. But you have to admit, they force the wizards to respect and fear them! If the Vamps and Weres ever truly get organized or maybe worse, join forces, the wizards are going to be forced to recognize their rights. I thought the omake with Harry and the old shells was great! I mean, who'd expect a fart to make a Dragon go super sonic?! Thoiugh the part where Harry's cooling his ass off in the lake makes me think of the coyote from the cartoon. You know I can just see Voldies face if Snape discovers that Harry can easily digest him without any harm and this time, regardless of how many Horcruxes he has, HE AIN'T COMING BACK!