Reviews for The War Angel: Ride of the Four
dbtiger63 chapter 5 . 4/1/2011
That was an excellent chapter! Naruto continues to positively influence those who he can sense will improve and even got Sakura to change her view, maybe. I'll wait to see how that goes. Kurenai's coming out party was done very well. It makes so much sense to augment her illusions with cold steel. Her enemies won't know how much trouble they are in until it's too late, great combination of skills.

Good story!

Thanks

DB
LunarCatNinja chapter 10 . 4/1/2011
Cool, can't wait to see what you have planned for the battle! W
dbtiger63 chapter 4 . 3/31/2011
Glad I found this FF or more correctly that this FF was re-written because I'm truly enjoying Naruto's character, his improvement of the genin squads, educating those with lost clan information and last having his own group of Bud girls!

Thanks

DB
dbtiger63 chapter 3 . 3/31/2011
He's an anomaly even without the Kyuubi and that he doesn't rely upon his power to be as strong as he is speaks volumes. You created a story where the victim becomes a true warrior wise beyond his years and for this I applaud you! I can't stand for him to be portrayed as an idiot even for comic relief. The loud speeches and rants, not being aware of his skills and abilities and fighting stronger opponents are recipes for death in a world where so many are trained to kill. You version knows these facts and was trained very well. He still shows that spirit to help others though he can be abrasive in the process but that's part of his charm.

Good job!

DB
dbtiger63 chapter 2 . 3/31/2011
Love this chapter! He is what his master made him and Konoha will be better for it IF they listen and improve. Yes grown ups don't usually listen to kids even young adults but Naruto has proven quite quickly that judging a book by its cover does work sometime and this book cover shows power and abilities they don't necessarily have in the village right now.

I'm hooked!

Thanks

DB
Fox of the Blood Moon chapter 10 . 3/30/2011
you know this story is really fucking awesome. maybe its cuz i alwas had a small part of my mind that was obsessed with the idea of conquest, war, famine, and death personified meh aannnnywaaay really good story cant wait for the update.
The Fifth Rider of Armageddon chapter 10 . 3/29/2011
Ahh I finally got to reading this chapter and was pleased with it. I especially like the part where Ino rubbed Sakura's weakness in her face.

And thanks for the shout out man. Every review helps.
Akane215 chapter 3 . 3/29/2011
~cries~Oh my god! you're story is pissing me off so ad that i'm laughing and crying at the same time! The story is good. it's great naruto's not a bumbling idiot that he's portrayed as but while it's pretty great, I think you should've kept Naruto as his usual self with the mountain of knowledge and a bit of coldness at times. About his puberty, not all guys hit it at that age~shudders~I should know. Been around them long enough. Naruto not being sexually active like that would have a lot of appeal to your readers. i know they're looking for something different but i just don't think you should've done it like that. Just seems to throw off the story since, in a sense, you're going off the original storyline almost. Please consider what I've said. ja ne
Akane215 chapter 2 . 3/28/2011
I'm am so sorry but what the flying fuck? why the fuck dija have to make Naruto such a god-like, emotionless bastard? he's fucking worse than sasuke. sorry, no disrespect to my Elders, but seriously? being cold and emotionless is Sasuke's thing, not naruto. if you were going to make him emotionless, you should've kept him as close to being himself as possible. He could've been his same self but got very serious when in battle or in the situation with the council members. I like a good story and I can write some pretty good pieces(don't finish it TT), but you butchered Naruto's personality. I know i haven't read much but i just couldn't take it anymore. You got the whole personality thing down, you got a good story line or plot going on but seriously. I think you shouldn't have done that to Naruto. I'm a fan but i just don't get on much to constantly read. Oh and ad the age of six, Naruto was in the Academy. Might want to reread your information. Great story so far and i like you. you're blunt. We need more people like that. Not afraid to tell the truth. hope you have lots of reviews. see you in the later chapters!
edward kizaru chapter 7 . 3/28/2011
nice
Island of Promises chapter 10 . 3/27/2011
YoYoYo. This story is terrific and loved all of it. But, wasn't Naruto a little OOC? I mean his eyes are cold in the beginning. Yet he taught people he had little contact with.
Litewarior chapter 10 . 3/27/2011
O_O

You're giving up bashing?

RUN FOR YOUR LIVES! THE APOCALYPSE IS UPON US!

Just joking.

But seriously, I think that's a good move. It's one of my major dislikes of your stories, and getting rid of it will improve your story.

Just don't make them good in one sudden movement. You have to have a transition phase, otherwise it goes into ridiculous territory. Unless you have an immense lifechanging moment. For instance, in RL, this one girl at my school was loud, outspoken, and rude to everyone. Then she had pictures of her having sex with a guy posted on Facebook. The next day, she suddenly became withdrawn.

Just a bit of food for thought.
mfmxxx chapter 10 . 3/27/2011
Umm, you have bashed team 7 though...
god of all chapter 10 . 3/27/2011
Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.
Cryptic Saiyan chapter 10 . 3/26/2011
nice work, but if you really love dbz so much, write a story about it like bonesboy10. his first chapter is awesome
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