Reviews for Training
Mal-Aki Ea Hecate chapter 2 . 7/23/2013
Oooooh! I'm looking forward to reading more!
roo17 chapter 2 . 8/20/2010
I loved it! Too cute~!
Kichou chapter 2 . 1/11/2010
Nice chapter. Update soon please.
Clockwork Phoenix chapter 2 . 1/10/2010
I loved this second chapter. _

Ooh Cloud was awake...

Looking forward to the next chapter.
Hitokimi chapter 2 . 1/9/2010
AW... Cloud was awake ! HAhahahaha

Nice and fast if Cloud was able to pull a fast one over the Silver General and the Raven Wolf. Even more amusing is if he's already figured it out and just now sits back and watches the other two try and ' convince' him of a three way.

Anyway love the chapter can't wait for the next one.
Epoch95 chapter 2 . 1/8/2010
I am so happy you UPDATED! PLEASE UPDATE SOON
Figment of an Imagination chapter 2 . 1/8/2010
Haha, I'm enjoying this so far!
Epoch95 chapter 1 . 12/25/2009
I like your story) PLEASE UPDATE SOON
NixRegina chapter 1 . 12/23/2009
i love it plz continue its really really great
AkumaXAi chapter 1 . 12/21/2009
OMG how r they gonna explain this to sephy?

I can't wait for the 2nd chapter

Great fic too I love it!
Kichou chapter 1 . 12/19/2009
I have to know what will happen next. Nice chapter. Update soon please.
KitsuneBlackFox chapter 1 . 12/17/2009
Well, I must say its really good, but I have advice for you:

1- find betareader or before you post new chapter, reread it day or twoo after writting. You will see mistakes like repeated words

2- I know thats fanfiction but in one second is Cloud shy like little schoolgirl in sexshop and in next he is little devil in bed?

3- the sex scene need to be described more. You began this story well but in the end it seems like you want to end it and post ASAP.

4- please, with that ending, dont writte in next part, that Seph will immediately join Zack&Cloud in bed

And now some positive things:

it made me chuckle few times, syntax is good and if you rewrite it a little to twoo parts and give things between them more time to develop, itll be great

Please, get it like friendly advice and not like b*tching

PS: Im sorry for my english, it isnt my native languague :)
Clockwork Phoenix chapter 1 . 12/17/2009
I liked this. But what are they going to say to Sephiroth... Looking forward to the next chapter. _
Momma's Freaky Child chapter 1 . 12/16/2009
ahaha, I giggled at this xD I love how you discribed Clouds expressions, they sound so cute 3