|Reviews for Hearts of the Night|
| LyriaHart chapter 34 . 9/27
When is the next chapter coming out? I want to know what happens next. Just curious no pressure.
| Guest chapter 34 . 7/1
Ok so it wasn't a perfect story BUT you certainly have a good idea and plot going...
All you gotta look out for is areas where you rush the story a bit and well... Grammar and spelling... Lots of it... It's just that, when you are talking about one thing in a paragraph and then it suddenly switches to a different scene it makes the story feel rushed but not in a good way.
As for some of your other stories... I read one of your one shots earlier (love tips) and that lead me to this story. I really liked that one and like I said you've got a good tale going on here... I also recognise your angel and demon series with contestshipping. I LOVED THOSE STORIES I read them a long time ago but couldn't find them again cause I lost the authors name... :(
BUT I've found ya again so no problems
ANYWAYS... Keep up the good work!
Btw... Sorry if this is a bit long...
| chrisropher ss.m chapter 26 . 4/23
where can I find the sequel?
| christopher ssmi chapter 34 . 4/22
Where the HELL is the rest because this right here is very very very very very very very good stuff
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/24/2016
this is for the reviewer named "smartremarker"
You dumbass, no character besides Ash, Gary and Tracey have official last names. Berlitz is a fanmade last name.
AND Hikari doesn't mean Dawn, it means Light. Dumbass.
| TheFranticShiper chapter 2 . 6/17/2016
This is a combo of funny and cute. One of my favorites! Can't wait to see haw things turn out!:)
| MidnightGardevoir chapter 30 . 6/14/2016
Pls pls pls turn May into a vampire in the sequel! I'm begging ya!
| Aqua Aquana chapter 34 . 9/19/2015
you have talent but what you write is damn confusing sometimes... plus can you nt keep people hanging on a cliff?!
p.s grammar and spelling please
p.p.s can you write the whole story
| Guest chapter 12 . 5/24/2015
YOU HAVE NO
| Anonymous chapter 7 . 5/24/2015
YOU HAVE NO TALENT
| xyz chapter 34 . 5/21/2015
Not gr8 but ok
| smartremarker chapter 1 . 11/1/2014
Dawn's last name is Berlitz. Hikari translates to Dawn, so you made her name Dawn Dawn.
| Guest chapter 34 . 6/26/2014
Wow this story is great when are u gonna finish it it's awesome must read more!
| Space bacon chapter 34 . 6/6/2014
Are done writeing this indeed to read more
| Kimkat789 chapter 20 . 5/17/2014
I think that paul the bloodsucking vampire did it to dawn