Reviews for Don't Stand Up
more-than-melody chapter 1 . 12/22/2009
I'm glad you asked me to read this. :) There's some really nice points to this.

I loved these lines:

Places,

Faces

A smile in a frown,

rain on a sunny day.

But how long can it last?
young dawn chapter 1 . 12/22/2009
Lovely! Poignant and artistic. You really have a talent for these kinds of things. :) That last line can really impact a person; it hits home.

Overall, an excellent job. You should venture into the FMA fandom more often.

Always,

Sora
Starry Pink chapter 1 . 12/16/2009
What a beautiful poem! I really like the way you structured it.