|Reviews for Don't Stand Up|
| more-than-melody chapter 1 . 12/22/2009
I'm glad you asked me to read this. :) There's some really nice points to this.
I loved these lines:
A smile in a frown,
rain on a sunny day.
But how long can it last?
| great gospel chapter 1 . 12/22/2009
Lovely! Poignant and artistic. You really have a talent for these kinds of things. :) That last line can really impact a person; it hits home.
Overall, an excellent job. You should venture into the FMA fandom more often.
| Starry Pink chapter 1 . 12/16/2009
What a beautiful poem! I really like the way you structured it.