Loved this!

That was a great story :) i just watched the season finale lol im delayed. but ye that was very well written.

I love your portrayal of this. I agree that this is going to hit poor Dex hard. Those poor kids! I can't wait for the next season to see what happens! This was a great piece!

love dex too...

so sad, you make me cried with just one chapter ..? wow.. never happened before..

good writing.

Liked the fic

I liked your take on this.

YES. that is all there needs to be said...awesome.

I liked how you wrote Dexter's emotions over Rita's death and Trinity. This story was well written and tragic.

good work!

Excellent! The emotions Dexter has been building up over time finally came out. Too bad it took this event for that to happen. The irony here is that it took his mother's murder to drive his emotions underground and now Rita's death, the mother of his own child, to bring them back. This is truly a tragic story and well written.

I was crying at the end of this fic. Not only am I fan of Dexter but I can totally see him crying when his sister finally realizes who the blood belongs to. Even though we did not see him cry at the end of this season we might see it when it returns.

I was so shocked at the ending as well. I did not see that coming and I think Deb should move in with them to help raise the kids.

that was amazing! I wish is it wasn't a one-shot and that it coninuted afterwards! But great job.

Yess. this season's finale was shocking. ): I didn't care about Rita really but I think I'll miss her character. I can't wait until next year for S5. urghh.

Anyways, this was a much needed post-episode fic. u I love it! You've got Harry's character down really well.

As soon as I saw the episode I had to come and check here, and you didn't disappoint haha. Thanks for sharing.

Wow! I loved it

That is a great starting point if you ever wanted to do something longer.

That was amazing, actually. All your self-deprciating had me waiting for a poorly written piece, but that was truly excellent. I'm glad you had Dexter get rid of Harry. Honestly, that was almost emotional for me, since I just saw the episode last night, and I think I'm still in shock. I also dreamt about that final scene.

If I were caught up on Supernatural, I'd probably go read those too, but I'm only on season 2, so that doesn't really work. But seriously, your writing is excellent.