|Reviews for angel|
| Don't Call Me Short chapter 1 . 3/21/2010
| Rocking Phillip chapter 1 . 1/6/2010
dude that was so good
| ChasingProse chapter 1 . 12/17/2009
That had me tearing up. I loved the parenthetical musings. I use them myself. The only part I can say anything about is right before Cloud screams, the synonyms for despair are almost unnecessary. I loved it, I'm just saying a small thing.
| weuhlhghlhaerlghklehghkghdskhr chapter 1 . 12/17/2009
Poor Zack! D:
Lol but really well written, well done!
| sage chapter 1 . 12/17/2009
this was nicely done. i really liked it. i think you had cloud and zack's character right on! awesome job! :)