Reviews for Wilson's Past Meets His Present
LonelyNightz chapter 1 . 2/14/2013
lol, great story!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/6/2012
great :-0!
JillEsterNapier91 chapter 1 . 1/23/2011
oh wow! Wilon in a porno! I would definately love to see that! That was funny in the end. House, that was cruel! But amazing work! Hilson is my one nd only pairing that I love from the show. Amazing work! love love love it!
AishaPachia chapter 1 . 2/27/2010
HAHAHAHA! Lol!

The ending was so House'ish that I just died! XD

Aweosme oneshot. I love it.
Aquarius Seth chapter 1 . 12/20/2009
E-mails? Sweet. Make Wilson sweat it out a bit! It was cute!
Fate-Means-Screwed-On-Purpose chapter 1 . 12/18/2009
that was fucking awesome! Your great!
MadScientistGirl chapter 1 . 12/17/2009
I enjoy your writing, but I have never enjoyed your sex scenes, and I have been trying to figure out why this is, so that maybe I could offer some constructive criticism. I think I have finally put my finger on it, and I hope that you are not offended by the comment, as I really want to help, because in general, I think you are a good writer (and you write Hilson, and anyone that does that needs to be encouraged to write more).

If you look at the really long paragraph that describes most of the action (begins with "Wilson leaned forward"). There is is not a single emotion other than physical pleasure described. There's no getting inside of a character's head to have the character react to what's happening. It is a list of motions and a little dialog. So because you are not connecting the characters emotionally, and letting the audience "feel" the experience, the sex feels flat. It is like (I would imagine), sex with a hooker. Momentary pleasure, but nothing lasting because there is no emotional component.

I hope this helps.
micetea chapter 1 . 12/17/2009
Aw, don't worry Wilson, House won't do that if he ever wants more of that really hot action") I loved it! Hope theres more, after all House will want his own video now")