Reviews for Nicotine
Jason's Favorite Madwoman chapter 6 . 1/12/2010
What, no Near injuries? Dang.

This is wonderful! God, I wish I could write poems as good as these! Poor, kicked around Matt, eh?

Matsuda is trailer trash? I KNEW IT!
Lucidique chapter 6 . 12/26/2009
"You're sitting next to me,

still warm from the car heater.

And suddenly we're closer

than we probably should be"

I think I just died a little bit. In a very good way though. :D
Lucidique chapter 5 . 12/23/2009
Nothing wrong with dirty. :D And this was delightfully so. You described their relationship perfectly with so few words. Excellent as always. I really need to stop reviewing though because I really want Near to get the axe somehow. :P
RinRinRin chapter 4 . 12/22/2009
i like it! DECK NEAR! YAY! :D I'm only reviwing cause I like your stuff, not cause I wanna save Near. Quite the contrary.
Lucidique chapter 4 . 12/22/2009
I LOVED this. The simplicity of it made it very emotional. Excellent work as always.
elizelutus chapter 3 . 12/20/2009
'Do I want this part?

Do I want to be your lover,

your everything,

your first?

Or am I just selfish?'

Sounds like Mello! And Matt a virgin? That's new )

Once again, awesome poem; keep it up.
HeartBeatFailure-x chapter 2 . 12/19/2009
I likey this one too D
HeartBeatFailure-x chapter 1 . 12/19/2009
it was written really well :) I liked all of it _

*Choc-chip-cookie*
ChocoAndCigs chapter 3 . 12/19/2009
I'm really happy when I saw you updated this.

I've been thinking poetry thoughts lately.

Hopefully it can lead to something as good as this. :3
Lucidique chapter 3 . 12/18/2009
Gorgeous 3 Your poems make me so sad but I love them!
RinRinRin chapter 3 . 12/18/2009
omg! SHANK NEAR WITH A CANDY CANE! DO IT! WOOT! .
RinRinRin chapter 2 . 12/18/2009
omg... i can relate to that poem. that's the way my muse is... it worries me. :/
Lucidique chapter 2 . 12/18/2009
Ah we go from sweet and tragic with the first one to just straight up depressing. But it's depressing in a good way. :D I hope you have more of these on the way! Please say you do!
Lucidique chapter 1 . 12/18/2009
:'( Sniff... That was really sweet. Very well written.
elizelutus chapter 2 . 12/17/2009
Aww, I love these poems so far! I can't wait to see you write more )
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