Reviews for Without Sasuke |
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![]() ![]() ![]() What will happen next and I'm glad that Naruto and Sakura's love for each other is getting stronger and stronger! |
![]() ![]() Normally I'm a sacra basher but I this story makes her so much better |
![]() ![]() ![]() They may not have been able to take Sasuke back with them, but they could have taken Sasuke's eyes. That's what Orochimaru wants, why not allow Orochimaru to win the battle, but lose the war? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm glad you allowed Heni to give as good as he got, he may have lost, but Sasuke didn't walk away unscathed. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I cannot put my finger on why, but the romance in this fic feels like it was written by a 12-year-old. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Everything that makes people unique in the original, you seem to have no problem to getting rid of willy nilly. Earlier in an author's note you stated that you wouldn't want to make them godlike, yet you are just handing out random ass powerups to Sakura like she's a kid in a candy store. Mokuton, Rasengan, Genjutsu, Shadow Clones, two affinities, genius level brains. If this isn't godlike then what the fuck are we talking about here. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It also makes no sense why Sakura is still calling Sasuke 'Sasuke-kun'. Kun is a term of endearment. Sasuke is an asshole, someone who was willing to sacrifice Sakura to let himself live, and now a traitor. In what world is he still dear to Sakura? |
![]() ![]() ![]() The more I read this story, the more I feel like it's falling into the trap of 'adding plot points to address whatever needs that the author wants to address at that particular moment'. Sakura randomly gaining the Mokuton is unique and I can stomach that, but more stuff that just randomly get stated without any previous indication. The invasion being known about, Naruto and Sakura striking up a friendship with Hisemi back in wave, etc. It doesn't fully ruin the story for me, but every time something like this happens, it just kicks the attention of your read from the current story into thinking about if a particular plot point was addressed before. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please add more soon this is a great story |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is the best NaruSaku fic ever, the romance between those two comes so naturally that makes you wish that is canon because the Sakura here is a great character. It is a pity that seems abandoned. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sakura is right, she was a bitch in the academy but at least she is making amends for that now. On the other way, Hinata knew how lonely Naruto was and she never did anything for him, all she had to do was talk to him and be his friends. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Man, this Sakura is how it should have been in canon, she doesn't need to be strong or talented to be a interesting and useful character. |
![]() ![]() ![]() samurai do use chakra in naruto but only to strengthen their bodies and to attack |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story, it is a shame that it has not been updated in years. I look forward to a potential update! 9/10 |
![]() ![]() ![]() It seems you gave Harmony some brains to go with her intelligence. I might like this Sakura, I do think she needs to meet a couple of seasoned kunoichi to show her how to function as one. |