Sasuke I feel now will have a easier time in betraying the village now in the current condition that he is so his betrayal might happen faster now.

I see major issues with just Naruto and Sakura in their respective teams the third member has to be addressed soon, and Sasuke is a big deal in the story whether I like him or not because it is his presence that drives Naruto to get stronger but not having him around will make Sakura better.

Hinata will be a major obstacle because in term of pairings she is superior than Sakura since Kishimoto ruined Sakura's character by her obsession towards Sasuke.

The Two man cell will be vulnerable to anybody someone has to replace Sasuke in that team you can't function as a Team with two people only.

I actually thought that Sasuke would be killed by the simple title of this story but just because he is off the team his value and presence will not be eliminated.

I hope you continue this. Its so great! i hope you go into more detail of Naruto and Sakuras love relationship. They are my favorite pairing of couples, even if they arent canon.

Himiko just up and left without taking Neji and left him with the wolves then came back with a replacement as a son then expected everything to be okay. Honestly I would be beyond pissed. She abandoned him and had a child to replace him smh

Please update

Just a little confused as to how there can be 7 teams passing the second round of the chunnin exams... There were supposedly only 12 and then 10 teams to begin with therefor only 5 or 6 teams can pass with the amount of scrolls handed out... Love the story though!

I do not have an account here, but I absolutely love to read anything that I can possibly get my hands on. I especially love anime very much. And I have loved every enthralling chapter you have written. I'm not a writer by no means, so I do have any suggestions. However, I do have a love for this story that you have written, and a hope that it will be continued. Keep on writing, I love what you are doing!

ive been reading this story for a while now, and i like it, if you even THINK about abandoning it, so help me god i will track you down, kidnap you, and force you to watch the cable companies customer help channel for days on end until you continue to write this story again, got it?

A little odd that Sakura is being taught Wood Release. It's a Kekkai Genkai so it requires certain genetics to use, not teachable. That said, I'm finding having the rules bent since this story has been good so far. I only hope somewhere it's explained why no one else in the universe of this fic uses Wood Release, since lots of shinobi can use both Water and Earth natures.

They finaly kissed, nice.

Quick note about Gaara. He didn't teleport, that was. shunshin, the Body Flicker Technique. It's super speed, not teleportation.

Yeeees, FINALLY they got together. xD