This chapter was really good.

I enjoyed this chapter more. Good stuff.

This chapter was a bit annoying. Something I've noticed with a lot of Naruto fanfic authors is that they have random, new characters do things that are unreasonable or break the rules of the series without realizing it. The Substitution Technique is not something that can be spammed. This Kiyoko Lady isn't going to have a bunch of logs everywhere to use, nor would she be any match for Kakashi if she is just a Tokubetsu Jonin. Come on man, Kakashi is the top Konoha Jonin besides the Sannin. This is a little much.

Just discovered this fic. So far I'm liking it and I hope I continue to. It also helps that the fic *appears* to still be ongoing. Hopefully you'll have more chapters by the time I catch up.

Yet another 'lesson' about dressing like a goth or a kid playing army mans? They are not, infact, soldiers as we know them so they do not need to dress like them.

A modern soldier with all their weapons, explosives, ammunition plus armor and the myrid other items required for their tasks is conspicuous as fuck and often find themselves stuck in the middle of buttfuck nowhere. The point being is they arent really expected to blend in with a local population, camoflauge is just there to make them harder to shoot.

A ninja on the other hand is specifically trained for working undetected among a population, that is the very first thing we learn about Konoha ninja as we follow Naruto from his initial training onward. This suits Narutos bright orange jumpsuit as he is a loud obnoxious pre-teen who becomes a just as loud but slightly less obnoxious teenager. Nobody would give someone that loud dressing in equally 'loud' clothing a second glance as that is how he is supposed to look. If it wasn't for the metal patch on his headband nobody would know he was a ninja without similar training thus making his outfit an actual intellegent choice of dress for a ninja.

muito bom.

Wow I! So good bro!

The Wave arc needs serious rewriting. The two most blatant errors:

1) Why would the Demon Brothers even be an issue? Kakashi took them out already, and I refuse to believe he didn't deal with them so they are no longer a threat. What, did he let them go even knowing they're going to come back?

2) What was Tane doing while Zabuza had Kakashi trapped? Jerking off? He should have been involved in that fight from the get-go. This is a clear case of falling in the trap where everyone except the main characters are incompetent morons. Kakashi had a good opinion of Tane's skills, the man needs to back that up.

Meant to say "there are t many Hinata stories running around"

I really love it to find a Naruto/Sakura are to many Hinata stories running around.

after the match of sakura and hinata i was u repulsed to read more. what ever split personality sakura was given as comic relief u made it into an actual power of reason and inspiration for her. all the best with the fic.

Anko said there are 12 teams but near the end of the chapter it says 10 teams. What happened to the two teams that have disappeared?

Why does Sakura have wood release. ?! I lost interest cause of it. Wood release is a bloodline unless her mother or father were kidnapped and used in the snakes experiments and survived with tenzo. However the experiment didn’t cultivate fully on them until they birthed her

Why is Assuma the nephew of the 3 rd hokage. Isn’t it supposed to be son.

Not bad at all... hope to read more soon... funnily enough, I'm tempted to suggest giving Sakura the Sharingan and Naruto the Rennigan after Pein, Konan, Itachi and Kisame's defeat. It would certainly keep Tobi (Obito unless you are actually making him Madara) from getting either of them and would stop Danzo from getting Shisui's other eye