Reviews for Without Sasuke |
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![]() ![]() ![]() FUCKING AWESOME! Sorry. This is one of the best story's yet. Please update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just to clarify: when Sakura's widen at the end of the chapter, was that because she thought she was out of the Tsukiome (lol on the spelling, sorry)? |
![]() ![]() ![]() How about a dark Konan? Paperwork is already the Kage Killer. What if it was sabotage? She'd also have the ultimate spy network and possibly ultimate artificial assassin. She could stop all forms of fuinfutsu and make literacy a thing of the past. All without physically being present. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I give this a three out of ten. Interesting ideas and creative language, however character interaction is really uncomfortable and the amount of OOC is painful to read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Soooooooo, KakashiTeam were super ruthless with Samurais and Civilians but when it came to the Demon Brothers they just tied them up to admire the view and let them get away to fight them later on making their mission unecessarily complicated? Sounds pretty reasonable /s this is bullshit lmao |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok I can only start by saying this is the best fan fiction ever. I've been looking for stories like this and I can only hope you update soon. I also hope that your life gets better and you get more inspiration to write |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well just binge read this over the last few days. This was awesome. Not sure if you plan to add more, but if you do I cant wait. Keep up the good work. |
![]() ![]() update psl |
![]() ![]() you made naruto seem really weak in the last few chapters he was stronger before the training lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sasuke holding onto the idiot ball for dear life. Also, Naruto and Sakura seem way more competent than normal. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You are not subtle. I guess the title says it all. |
![]() ![]() Characters are cartoonish. |
![]() ![]() ![]() your writing has vastly improved, as has your grasp of the English language also Itachi you bastard xD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow I am so glad you updated this story. Now here's hoping and praying the next update will be soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damn been a while since I last saw this but it was worth the wait it seems something very interesting will happen next chapter. |