U was hoping haku would join them

You literally ruined this fic with the way you approached the time-skip. Its starts off boring and confusing then the whole useless chase and fight with sakura, and really... why would sakura have to go back before Naruto why not just wait. Suck you fucked this great story up to the point where it’s physically hard to read.

Dang what an intense scene! Loved the way you made the interaction between Itachi and Sakura intense and yet also playful. :)

Sorry, but why would I continue reading more chapters if I don't like the first one? My issue is the excess drama telling us how everyone feels about how great a burden Naruto has. Beyond being ridiculously overdone, if so many people felt that way then Naruto would not have been so ignored growing up. I realize it is quite possible you get better later, but the first chapter is all most of us will read to test your fic.

I know I’m 9 years late but i see you’ve updated very recent. So far this fic is amazing it has canon details with your own extremely creative AU input. Keep up the good work (if fic isn’t already finished barely on ch2)

I suppose that Tsunade clocking in is as good a point to cut off a show, but I actually enjoyed the "filler" episodes.

Three options Sakura could have gone with.

1. Punch his eyes out. Don't need eyes to be used as breeding stock.
2. Cut his hands off. No more hand signs!
3. Cut his feet off. See how far he gets after that.

Or 4. No plan survives enemy contact. Kill him, it was unavoidable. Sakura went for the capture, but he zagged instead of zigged, snapped his own neck. So sad.

He's survived too often it's time for the story to be without sasuke.

Oh, nice job on having the rasengan actually kill instead of being a spiny dodge ball.

Huh, you didn't have sack-o do his weirdo crap. Just as well. When you swap Naruto for Kiba, you get ULTRA DEMON CANCER for sack-o. I've read it before, not pretty.

Huh, didn't have Jiraiya promise to kill her if she helped Orochimaru. That was one of Jiraiya's most badass scenes.

Favorite is the filler where Jiraiya and Naruto use Rasengan as a frickin boat motor, neatly lampshading the sheer hell naruto went through to learn it.

Best scene ever though was when naruto had to henge as the princess and ino kept smacking the crap out of him for being himself.

Nice to see other people felt the same about chidori, shame you doubled down.

Sorry no. It's IMPORTANT that chidori be Kakashi's jutsu. It's not just his signature, it's his baby.

I can buy him teaching it to Itachi in ANBU, or maybe itachi stole it while fighting him, but just serving it up as an uchiha jutsu? Not cool.

Sometimes I feel like you don't even care about how jutsu work. Like how you removed kage bunshin ability to speak in one scene, then have them powerful enough to perform Shiki Fuin in another.

I like the fic, but this chidori thing does not work for me.

This is where most Naruto fics die. Maybe you should call this Army of two, what with Naruto able to spam an army, and Sakura being able to shape the battlefield, since Sasuke is not absent. I guess an actual without sasuke fic might have had him pull a stunt against zabuza in wave and getting impaled or decapitated. Aside from leveling up Sakura and having Naruto being more classicly intelligent, the biggest change is an extra hyuuga.

Last chapter near the beginning you showed sakura as being a sasgay fan girl still fix that shit dumb ass

Have naruto beat the fuck out of sasgays queer ass and kill him sasgay is weak and pathetic and is a paedophiles clock sleave

I'm not reading this trash any further unless naruto ends up becoming an over powered godlike badass