Take it from a fellow author. Sometimes you juat have to bite the bullet and publish what you have got. Even when it is not where you want it to be. You can always update the chapter. On the other hand this chapter fulfills its purpose I believe. Sakura sure is a smart cookie. Being so in control all the time. I can't wait to read more.

I will review in depth later, but I just wanted to let you know: you're wrong. This chapter is fine. Done doubt yourself :)

I love Sakura mange’s to get out or turn the tables on Itachi!

It’s been a while since you update and I’ve been anticipating a newest chapter for a while! I saw that notification and I dropped everything to read this. I almost thought you had abandoned this work but you didn’t let me down (not in a pressuring way but in appraisal) This chapter is shorter, but it’s different and I enjoy the new style.

The whole game played between Itachi and Sakura is something I really enjoy. The ending was very exciting and I can’t wait to find out how Sasuke was killed.

To be frank, I’m not a big fan of the two personas of Sakura because I interpret it as when Sakura grow more confident, she lives with the inner Sakura and eventually she disappears, that’s why we don’t see inner in Shippuden. But I still enjoy the interactions it brings forth.

This chapter is pretty dialogue heavy and i think it’s necessary because of the chain of events that happen. I’m not sure if it’s your new writing style but it’s definitely thoroughly enjoyable.

Looking forward to the new chapter!

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Great story! Wish you had continued. Really really enjoyed the story.

nice

I enjoy a lot of this story, especially what you've done with Sakura, but the whole Sasuke thing just ruins it in my opinion. I just don't want to continue with how ridiculous he and the situations surrounding him are. I hope to see you rewrite this in the future.

Best wishes.

Without Sasuke? If only that was true for the entire story instead of just Team 7. Every second paragraph you have this parody of Sasuke running his mouth. It wouldn't be too bad if he was anything like the original, but you have given him the most trope heavy personality in the fandom. I feel like this would benefit greatly from a rewrite.

love it so far hope more soon

Are you going to continue this story?

The biggest question in the story has to be address during the canon Jiraiya did a poor job in training Naruto in reality all he did was improve his basic skills as a Ninja.

The path of becoming a Medical Ninja is the best one for Sakura since it was proven that she is most fit for this but also she has to become a disciple of Tsunade as well.

I hope to see Hinata back not taken out in this form because Hinata in close combat is stronger than Sakura in the canon.