Reviews for Kindred
meelee72 chapter 1 . 2/9/2014
How u leave us hanging... damn.

That was the sickest, most twisted, darkest thing I've read.
- & I loved it. - Wow.
I wonder if something is wrong w/ me for being just as turned on as Bella.
- Lol.- Great job.
la-geologia chapter 1 . 7/18/2013
gahhhhhhhhh I LOVED THIS FIC! It was crazy, sad, romantic, sexy as hell, and so much fun! The perfect ending, too. So glad I got to read this! Thanks for sharing, bb. :)
Julia-S77 chapter 1 . 9/28/2012
Wow I loved this really dark story. They are both perfect for each other. Can't wait to read what happens to renee and phil! X
QueenofAreaFive chapter 1 . 1/25/2012
Guh, this is the first Twilight fic I have ever read, and yes I only read it cause you linked me to it due to us tweeting about torture, but good God I loved it. You told a wonderful story, so descriptive. Might have been wrong of me but I was cheering Edward along when he was taking apart Jacob. Have to say I love this Edward, so strong and sure of himself.

After reading this there is no way in hell I'm avoiding writing that torture orgy. You've created a monster, or okay just feed me.
MinaRivera chapter 1 . 9/2/2011
wow, that was ummm... interesting. Mentalward indeed. just a question... did he kill her? Or we'll never know?


KaraLinda chapter 2 . 6/8/2011
This story odd and a little creepy. Also slightly confusing. What kind of mental illness does Edward have? Is he a serial killer? And/or does he have MPD? Multiple personality disorder?

It's a good story, just odd
jmrbear chapter 1 . 5/30/2011
The widely varied themes and genres of your one shots never ceases to amaze.

I loved your deeply twisted Edward and his equally twisted Bella. Your imagination must be a very interesting place to be. I enjoyed your original characterization of the wolf pack. Over all this was a fun and fascinating read and I have a feeling that it's one of those I'll come back to read over and over again.
choices2make chapter 1 . 5/25/2011
Deliciously disturbing.
flutterfli chapter 2 . 5/7/2011
Umm... wow. Mentalward is something else. (Maybe some darkward mixed in?)They had so much in common and were definitely made for each other. Would love to know what happens with Phil and her mother.
all sunshine makes a desert chapter 1 . 11/11/2010
I loved this! Will there be a continuation? (Pretty, pretty please?)
mephis1 chapter 1 . 8/12/2010
I read this story twice. Twice. And I am very sure I'll be reading it a third and fourth time. I relished every sentence and every little surprise you unleased on us. I admire the way you constructed Edward's character, along with his back-story. The same goes with Bella too. Unflinching and fulsome - I love your characterisations and the way you built the narrative arc. You've inspired me. Thank you.

~ Udo
Jay's World chapter 1 . 8/10/2010
A little unstable? And I thought 'Your Personal Stalker' was unstable! Jesus, these two are just psycho, and yet I just want to keep reading. More! More! and on the other side there's, No! No! They're constrast between white on white.
deleted010203 chapter 1 . 8/4/2010
Um, WOW. That's all, just WOW. Excellent story and obviously very different.
SweeterThanHeaven chapter 1 . 7/20/2010
"I could kill you," I whispered, and my monster cackled gleefully.




Jaded World chapter 1 . 7/18/2010
WOW! you clearly deserved the first place.

I read this with (Gary Moore - Still Got The Blues (Live) from youtube) in the background, no because of the lyricks, but because i found the hunting melody of the guitar solo at the end so fitting.

now, did bella really died at the end?

are going to write another another chapter for it?

please, let me know.
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