|Reviews for Dusty Desires and Lascivious Relations|
| That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 1 . 5/23/2012
I really liked this. I love poetry, and rhyme.
I think you did a nice job!
| SanguineTaurean chapter 1 . 1/17/2012
After reading one of Mel's chapters she gave you such high praises so I hopped on over to your profile and read this one shot before any others and it's exquisite. I love the format and the sweetness of the story.
And my heart goes out to you and your fmaily for the painful loss of your precious daughter. I am so, so sorry.
| pamaroo chapter 1 . 5/2/2011
This was such an interesting one shot! I loved the concept of it! Well done :)
| Itssme chapter 1 . 2/11/2011
This was quite well written. The rhyming was different, but seemed to fit with the concept of your story well. I really liked. Good job and good luck!
| Nooroo chapter 1 . 2/9/2011
I would never read poetry, I hate it. But this is just so beautiful that I read it 3 times. You should write more.
| Ivygirl702 chapter 1 . 12/26/2010
Amazing. I've never read a o/s that rhymed.
Favorite line: "Bella, my heart and mind are at war, for I desire what cannot be mine."
I'm stunned. This was beautiful.
| 2BEdwardspet chapter 1 . 12/21/2010
Talented indeed! Cute story
| babygirl0563 chapter 1 . 9/26/2010
wow i had to read this twice i really liked it
vaya con dios
| Fliberty chapter 1 . 9/8/2010
Well, I wasn't expecting poetry!
This is really unusual, I imagine it was really hard to write.
| Kat-n-cupcakes chapter 1 . 8/30/2010
I thought this was so clever and cute! I can't believe you managed to rhyme it all the way through...bravo! Will you be continuing your other story soon? I do hope so :) x
| j3ss1caaa chapter 1 . 6/9/2010
Excellent poetry. The story was beautiful! Amazing! I like farmhand Edward :)
| cat5050 chapter 1 . 2/6/2010
Oh, it certainly has a 'sure rhythm' to it.
I don't believe the description does it justice.
Amazing effort, great flow and easy reading
| avidreader69 chapter 1 . 1/3/2010
I liek the rhyming, id that take forever to write or were you completely inspired?
| cvds chapter 1 . 1/3/2010
Thank you for writing this rhyming o/s. It is really good and I enjoyed reading it. Edward as the ranch foreman - yes please-me drooling:)
| Cullenary chapter 1 . 12/20/2009
I thought that was really creative and completely unique! You did a great job and I can't imagine how difficult that was to come up with! way to go girl! thanks for writing! xoxoxoxoxox