|Reviews for One Hell of a Master|
| Faery66 chapter 23 . 7/2
Hope to read more soon.
| trepidon chapter 23 . 5/4
Im going to truly miss reading these chapters...
In about 500 quality chapters of devils like to dance...
Your 23 chapters have pretty much flowed in comparison to that...actually...even more so!
You are such an expert writer...if my vocab was betyer id probably make a 70,000 worded list on all the positives in your story!
Its like...this story is a true master piece!
I mean u definitely have the smut lemon qualities, but thats not all...the length of the chapters are incredibly long, its like im watching a movie! I absolurely love it!
And then theres the fighting scenes, so feeaking descriptive, even with the gore, and thats harder than smut! To correctly write gore and fight scenes...ugh...u have to be a tre pro, and honestly...u definitely are!
Im so jmpressed, and so thankful that ive come upon this incredibky well written story!
So very thankful indeed.
The depoctions of ciel, both matching similarly to the anime, and throwing in humorous scenes...man...this is like the perfect anime! Literally! This should be kuroshotsuji's next sequel!
It'd definitelly fit in for all those yaoi, shounen, gore, horror, thriller/suspense, slice of life...pretty much all genres and traits!
Gosh, i want to write more but...i dont want to take up the entire review page...
I just really want to let you know how amazing of a writer you are, and how much you've blessed us readers with such a graceful and elegant story!
Including many of the cast of Kuro, and some super cool OC's!
Its so beautiful, i cant stop crying at how amazing this story is!
Ahh...i...i just...cant believe its over.
I cant believe that theres even a writer out there of your calibre!
I mean sure theres hateweasel, you guys arefairly similar in writing styles, but you have more of the flavor of smut, while in my eyes...hateweasel has it jn humor.
But you're much more creative, with ciels voice box and the predicaments he's in with sebastian..you rven stuck with the schedule and the contract! THROUGHOUT THE ENTIRE STORY!
You didnt just nake a 23 chapter 8 billion or so story. ..u...were dedicated to it! And absolutely made it yours, and probay being the onky renowned writer of all of fanfiction to make a story such as this, involving all elements and putting it into one story.
Thank you for this amazing and wonderful story.
I will absolutely NEVER EVER FORGET this story!
I havr many future plans to re-read this story again, so soon infavmct, its just...addicting!
Have a wonderful life, oh great and brilliantwonderful writer!
| trepidon chapter 22 . 5/3
Wow...just wow...so much backstory!
But how does this all relate to where ciel was in that "cage"...or...where hr was left at the doorstep of sebastians manor?
What about how ciel promised sebastian and seb promised viel that they wouldnt leave eachother?
Yet...ciel was in a cage...then found on sebastians doorstep...?
| trepidon chapter 21 . 5/3
Too much, cried oh so much...criedddd!
I do like cis decision!
Very realistic I'd say!
| trepidon chapter 20 . 5/3
I admire the thoughtfulness you added on when it came to the movement of the windpipe, that would further cause complications with ciels breathings, almost similar to that of the famous, "asthma".
Incredibly sjarp might i add, very wise!
| trepidon chapter 19 . 5/3
This is truly the best sebaciel fic ive ever read in my life!
IN MY LIFE!
THE GENIUS IS IN MY PRESENCE! SHE HAS GRACED HER MARVELOUS PRESENCE OF HER INGENIOUS WRITING!
I AM SOOO PLEASEDDD!
altho...i do wish that sebastian would stop saying "my pet" to ciel...
It just...makes me cringe...
But overall, id have to tie this with devils like to dance fic, that one...cielois, and this one...sebaciel!
Bests fics ever! EVER!
| trepidon chapter 17 . 5/1
I can understand how ur like...the best sebaciel smut writer out there!
| trepidon chapter 16 . 4/29
Ahahahahh this was such a great chapter!
Omg...ciel in these predicaments...just absolute...EXTACY!
| trepidon chapter 15 . 4/28
Yeah! Yeah! Stick to those morals Ciel! Consume your pride! And let it be you!
Yess! You tell sebby whos boss! No wait...you SHOW sebby wjos boss!
Yeau yeah :)
| trepidon chapter 14 . 4/27
Such brilliance and creativity...
And im in its presence...
I feel so honored!
I absolutely love how you depoct ciels situations when he's in those nightmares, its just so detailed and accurate, realistic even!
This story just keeps getting better, just WOW!
| trepidon chapter 13 . 4/27
When ciel burst out in the kitchen, i was honestly expecting him to cry and a sob story to follow!
WAS I WRONG!
OMG! CIELLL! You...you omg...
I love the way how u portrayed ciel in this!
Its so...just sooooo...i cant find the word...so im just guns go with...PERFECT!
Gahhh! How can a story be this perfect?!
Its so realistic and it...it could even pass as an epic sequel to kuroshitsuji!
Well...minus the smutty yaoi haha
Such a brilliant piece of art this is!
| trepidon chapter 12 . 4/27
I am sooo happy u was born into this generation, so that i could be able to read your story!ď!
I am so happy!ď
An action packed story filled with romance and fluff / smut, plus outrageously hilarious random humor... this...THIS IS WHAT STORIES NEED!
| trepidon chapter 11 . 4/26
So brutal, so...scenic, this..THIS IS WHAT I WANTED!
As drax says in guardians of galaxy 2...
| DenIchi Hitsugaya chapter 23 . 4/26
This fan fiction had brought me to tears, and that happens once in a blue moon. this is... I have no words but how magnificent you are, there's a lot of words that I want to say but it seems that my mind won't let meI will always be patient and I will always going to hope that you will continue this. THANK YOU FOR CREATING SUCH MASTERPIECE! 3
| AlanaRusshel chapter 23 . 4/23
OMG! Please J-C continue writing this fanfiction. Omg i love it so fk muchhhhhh, huhu i want more