Reviews for I Want You to be Happy
InkWeaverabc chapter 1 . 6/10/2011
awww... that's really sweet! I love the idea of Fred wanting George and Angelina to be together after his death. it's so cute.

The only thing I'd say by way of CC is that sentance: Fred's passing affected him as much as it affected me. Maybe even more.

I didn't like that. it made Angelina seem wrapped up in herself and unsensitive. I felt that 'OF COURSE it affected him more than you! They were twins!' Fortunately most of it was very IC and that was the only part, but I really think you should change it. it was a blemish in an otherwise very touching fic. :)
LouphiaTheHobbit chapter 1 . 12/18/2009
hm, not bad! maybe you should have made it a george/angelina story )