|Reviews for Omniconscious|
| anakinpadmekenobi chapter 1 . 12/18/2009
I like how you set this up, it's different. The talk between Anakin and Obi-Wan was like thier normal bantering. I like it. Very good!
| Yippie chapter 1 . 12/18/2009
Nice job on both charaters
| Elenothar chapter 1 . 12/18/2009
Soemtimes the two just don't son't know how to communicate...
| Jedi Master Misty Sman-Esay chapter 1 . 12/18/2009
A different way to tell the story but it is working.
| Kath the Dreamer chapter 1 . 12/18/2009
I like the idea behind this. Obi-Wan seems to carry the weight of everything on his shoulders. He blames himself for his Master's death, he blames himself for Anakin's injury. He strives to be better to protect those he loves, but feels like he can only fail. The contrast with Anakin was also good. Is it because Anakin doesn't trust his Master enough to tell him about Tatooine?
Anyway, long rambling to say good job! I found these musings very poetic. Nicely done!