Making progress.
She is lonely, but is split on what to do. She still feels responsible for Charlie which is interesting

Favorite chapter so far. Bella certainly has an interesting sense of humor.

She is a ghost right

I dont get why you had to add the jacob interaction like this it feels weird and is a like a strange triangle like in the original books which was weird there too

Thanks for writing this amazing story!

Loving this witty unalive Bella

I really like this story! However, I don’t see how the Cullens or Bella did anything wrong to each other. I don’t think they should have to apologize for anything, especially Carlisle.

I absolutely adore this story, I love Bellas "galgenhumora Danish term for dark sarcastic inappropriate humourloved we were allowed a last moment with Charlie "before eternity"

I enjoyed this. I was sad that Charlie died and was not changed into a vampire

Well this had me in tears by the end but I absolutely loved it.

I loved this story.

Hello :) I just read the Spanish translation of your story and wanted to say thank you! You're an incredible story teller, I really enjoyed your story. Thank you so much to allow the translation. Greetings from México.

Thank you very much for allowing the translation of this wonderful story, it was very different and still so good! You are Ana amazing writer!

Hola! Muchas gracias por permitir la traducción de tan bonita historia, sin duda disfruté mucho leerla. Es una historia muy original, y me atrapó desde el primer momento.

Thank you so much! Grettings

Cute banter!