Thank you for sharing this story. Not gonna lie tho, it made me want to throw my phone multiple times but that just proves how good it is. (I mean, it managed to evoke such emotions. Lol.)

It’s like you’ve predicted the future and described their a father as Trump!

Such a great story! Thank you

Bella should have said to him that she wasn’t imagining some happily ever after, but to treat her like she was just an available hole was unacceptable. The total lack of respect he showed her was just unbelievable. I’m assuming there will be a reconciliation by the end of this story but I don’t think he serves it.

Second time reading this, I think. And man, it amazes me that you actually made me want Bella and Edward together! Like, what?! These two. And EM and rose. Oh man. I love this story, even with the man whore Edward, which I don’t usually go for. But, eh, people do dumb things. Life’s not always so black and white.

I fking love your writing.

This is too superficial... Their time together is so brief that all this hold no water for me.

I'd just like to point out that the hot fruit/counter scene was EPIC. how did I come up with this? It's like a perfect romantic movie porney scene lol

Your writing invokes such a feeling of summertime and laughter and fun. I loved this fic, it felt like reading a journal, or personal essays, and I binged this in one night. I hope you write or consider writing professionally! Thank you for sharing!

I like when Edward is the bad guy and after finding love he chance and in this case even quit smoking.
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LQUEZ

Great character development and beautiful love stories. Really enjoyed reading this. Thanks for a great read.

Sooo cute great ending

Knew it

I’m mad at how cute they are because I’m still mad at Edward but I forgive him so I don’t know I have mixed emotions

Hahaha love that they have to get her help