Reviews for Summer of Salt
tanseynz chapter 20 . 6/16/2014
Jesus they really have to work on their communication skills. Twenty...thirty...forty years might do it! Might!
tanseynz chapter 19 . 6/16/2014
Better and better...
tanseynz chapter 18 . 6/16/2014
He SHOULD cockblock! People aren't always what they seem? Pulease Bella. What are you, eight?
tanseynz chapter 17 . 6/16/2014
Finally the playing field is level! About bloody time! And yes, she is a princess - so sure she should be privy to everyone's secrets. Ugh!
tanseynz chapter 16 . 6/16/2014
Actually no, she's not an adult emotionally. That's the problem. I'm so glad they didn't have sex. That would be even more stupid.
tanseynz chapter 15 . 6/16/2014
He's come halfway, it's up to her to take her own steps to change too. So far she's still being the spoiled child.
tanseynz chapter 14 . 6/16/2014
Well done Jasper for calling her on her gameplaying. Stupid Bella for ignoring it, screwing around with Mike and pretending she's the only victim. Edward's patience is the real seachange. I love writing like this that involves the emotions of the reader so strongly.
tanseynz chapter 13 . 6/16/2014
Her game-playing is seriously pathetic, whatever he did. Clearly she's not emotionally old enough for any sort of relationship, drinking, partying, going anywhere except school or creche...
tanseynz chapter 11 . 6/16/2014
I'm glad you have a 'nice' Mike. Too often fanfiction writers do the canon thing slavishly, so a change is a pleasant surprise.
tanseynz chapter 10 . 6/16/2014
Great backstory which explains a lot. Still think he's chosen stupid choices given he grew up with his mother so knows better. Bella's words to him are clearly world tilting.
FicSisters chapter 1 . 6/16/2014
The FicSisters were thrilled to feature this story as part of our fandom celebration - Supermassive Sinday!
tanseynz chapter 9 . 6/16/2014
Best chapter so far! Bella giving him a come-to-jesus in front of his mum was perfect!
tanseynz chapter 8 . 6/16/2014
So why the hell is she going to the lake if he's going to be there? Has she nobody else to inflict her sorry self upon? Oh, that's right - she's a masochist, hence tarting herself up so she can sob prettily when he looks at her blankly.
tanseynz chapter 7 . 6/16/2014
Ahhh so it's her fault because she didn't believe him when he said he was a prick? Sadism and masochism in just seven words!
tanseynz chapter 5 . 6/16/2014
You'll be sooooorrrrryyyyy!
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