|Reviews for Summer of Salt|
| crazykatwp chapter 14 . 2/19/2010
OMG. So intense. They are both stupid.
| distant.dream118 chapter 8 . 2/19/2010
It's really hard to attempt to like Edward and Emmett. Why they gotta be Aggies? :) Love this story!
| angstsmoker chapter 14 . 2/19/2010
"I miss you." I've never heard him say anything like that to me; so simple and sweet.
"I'm here," I respond quietly, our eyes on each other." ..."I mean ... I miss being with you." - He said it:)
"I think you know what you want, B, but what you want might not be the best thing for you in the end. I think you want Edward, but know it should be Mike." "He pauses, smiling at me. "See how it plays out, but be conscious of the fact that it's unfair to keep Mike waiting if you're pining for Edward. All of us just want you to be happy, no matter what that means." - i think jasper said it best.
"I couldn't sleep and wanted to see if you were still up," he admits, squeezing his eyes shut. "If you knew how hard it was for me to keep myself from coming in there and kicking the shit out of him..." he shakes his head, probably trying to rid himself of the mental image." - Damn, he has changed. He didn't charge in there and beat Mike up (not that he has a right to do that).
Great chapter. Thank you for writing.
| sljones73 chapter 14 . 2/19/2010
I feel so bad for all three of them...Mike, Edward, and Bella. Great chapter...Edward is getting just a little taste of how she felt when he was with Tanya. I really thin Edward is changing...now we just haave to wait for him to prove it to her.
| MiCullen chapter 14 . 2/19/2010
Great chapter! And I'm glad she could "enjoy" Mike a little bit, cause she can't just run to Edward's arms like that... he should suffer a little bit and fight for her...lol
I'm so loving this story! D
| trishchar chapter 14 . 2/19/2010
I'm glad he heard - he's getting what he deserves. Now...they need to man up and move forward!
| Shamatt0403 chapter 14 . 2/19/2010
So he's hurt because he heard her and Mike screwing around but it didn't stop him form screwing Tanya. Well now they've both done it and can either get past it or get over it.
| allforbub chapter 14 . 2/19/2010
I guess I am in the 50% who love the chapter. I think that for this stage of your story, it was perfect. Keep up the great work!
| dizziestdaydream chapter 1 . 2/19/2010
So far I really like this. It is very well written.
| fleur de lisa chapter 14 . 2/19/2010
Plus, you pretty much had me at the a/n when you said: "tits on toast". Yeah, I'm easy to please, what can I say?
Seriously-great update. So glad that Mike had the sense to stop things before they went further, because Bella sure didn't.
| ilovedonuts chapter 14 . 2/19/2010
Yeah, don't let her make the same mistake he made, when is Mike leaving?
| Wonderwallthefirst chapter 14 . 2/19/2010
I think it progressed pretty normally. I'm not happy that she *used* Mike, but I don't think she knew she was doing it at the time. Well, she wanted to want him, at least. Jasper kind of hit it on the head. Like usual because Jasper is always awesome. :)
It must have been rough for Edward to hear what he heard. Although, I'm sure he wasn't totally innocent and was attempting a cockblock, even if he was just too late.
So, where to next? I trust you. :)
| NoahevansMom chapter 14 . 2/19/2010
How do you do it? Now I feel bad for Edward and I'm glad Bella and Mike didn't have sex. I was all for B&M sexytimes and for Edward getting it rubbed in his face but now I'm hoping for E&B to start throwing "I love you" at each other and run off to have some steamy hot sexin.
I loved this chap even if it left me emotionally confused LOL
| Mrz.JasperHale4Ever chapter 14 . 2/19/2010
i trust you
| flecour chapter 14 . 2/19/2010
2 wrongs don't make a right but it does make you feel better! At least in the moment...now Im sure she feels like shit. Really we're full circle here and she is acting just like Edward did to her. Excellent Chapter! )