Reviews for Summer of Salt
RoseArcadia chapter 18 . 3/19/2010
You made my day with all the James Dean in this chapter! I actually named my son after him.
squarepancake chapter 18 . 3/19/2010
Aw, I'm glad Edward made that decision. Though honestly, beating up another guy because Bella did something with him a few years ago? Edward is going to have to let that go, because if Bella moves to Texas, she's going to be facing far more graphic descriptions of far more perverse things that he's done. Threesome in a bar bathroom with Tanya and Playboy bunny anyone? If he expects Bella to handle it, he needs to be able to handle it too.

I think Edward is making strides towards being a much better person, not just trying to be one.
sonia chapter 17 . 3/18/2010
Love your story...

Next chapter with Mrs. Mallory, I hope you will make it humorous... but still its your story, so please continue soon

babylopez2008 chapter 17 . 3/18/2010
lol omg they got arrested!
some twilight FF chapter 17 . 3/18/2010
I just read all 17 chapters in one sitting! This is such a good story, I like how it's really different than most (with E&B not getting together right away and having a perfect relationship) and seems a lot more real, too. Really good job!
babylopez2008 chapter 16 . 3/18/2010
lol Alice.

dang Edward! keep it in your freakin pants!
babylopez2008 chapter 15 . 3/18/2010
aww that was a sweet guesture.
babylopez2008 chapter 14 . 3/18/2010

ugh Edward and his anger... that is always messing with things.

Aww Mike.

Ooh Jasper and Alice!
babylopez2008 chapter 13 . 3/18/2010

lol NO ONE messes with Rose's kitchen.

WTH Edward? Does he EVEN know what he wants?
babylopez2008 chapter 12 . 3/18/2010
ooh Mike.

Omg Edward is in love?

And I'm in shock.
babylopez2008 chapter 11 . 3/18/2010
I like this Mike :)
babylopez2008 chapter 10 . 3/18/2010
Yep Edward f'd up big time.

Dang that is a horrible dad!
babylopez2008 chapter 9 . 3/18/2010
Whoo go Bella!

Dang I wish I got a car.
babylopez2008 chapter 8 . 3/18/2010
Lol go Alice!

And I'm very disappointed in Edward.

PLEASE tell me the Longhorns kicked the Aggies!
babylopez2008 chapter 7 . 3/18/2010
Shoo I'm channeling all my anger towards the "Prick".

And I hope my team "Texas Longhorns" kick his ass in football.

Lol I don't care if he is fictional.

Give Tanya a freakin swirly or diease.
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