*sigh* Even better the 2nd time!

HI! I just wanted to tell you I read this chapter earlier over on Twilighted because it posted there first and I'm really mad at FF right now. So my review is there...but I loved it! So happy that Mike left and Bella is willing to give Edward another shot. I know it's not perfect and there is a lot to deal with but at least it's a shot. Loved his list! God, I can't wait for these two to be together. Great job! How do I get my teaser?

Okay, so this is the first review I've ever written, and I don't really know the drill and what to write, but I just wanted you to know that I love your story. Chapter 10, Wherever you go, there you are, from Edward's POV made me cry, like, really cry. He's a prick and all, but I felt so bad for him, sitting there with the scarf. And my heart broke a little bit when I read the part at the end where he sniffs it, and it smells like her, and he falls asleep smelling the scarf.

So, I just wanted to tell you to keep up with the good work, and to just keep writing chapters that make me cry, haha! I like your Bella and Prickward very much.

I trust you. While I think maybe Edward has suffered enough I also think he kinda got what he deserved by hearing them when he was clearly trying to cockblock. I am so eager for your story. I just love when I see an update. Great chapter!

My throat is all scratchy with emotion yet I REAFUSE to feel sorry for him. Seriously, he still kind of disgusts me. 6 months does not mean he is reformed. AND what could be more selfish than that jerk taking her viriginity and not using a condom on his over used d-ick? I love the story, really don't like Edward too much. So glad that you have them not changing immediately but needing time to experience the full spectrum of the maturing process.

Loving this! More please asap.

Oh my sweet DDG Yin, I said it once & I'll say it again,

You, this story & Prickward are pure effin win!

Where do I even start with what I love? Ok, Mike - love the Newton boy in this one. Such a cool one, and so what Bella needs because he is willing to be there in whatever capacity she will have him. It would have been so easy for him to take advantage of Bella given that she wants to hurt Edward, but he is such a class act.

And poor Prickward. I know, odd, but I do actually feel a little for him now that he gets what he put Bella through last summer.

And props to Bella for workin it. She has Prickward right where she wants him.

I know thats how you roll momma and I will roll whatever way you do. I gots nuthin but lurve in my big 'ol twangy heart for my Yin!

oxoxoxo

Yang

I don't understand why in your story (among others) oral sex is so dismissed like it's not the real act. When Edward said he doesn't want Bella to make the same mistake as him, how has she not already? I mean, I find oral to be sometimes even more intimate than penetration. It certainly involves all of the same parts and your partner has an even closer view of them too.

love you, trust you.

Great chapter!

Loving this story muchly! I do enjoy a strong dose of major E&B angst. Even more than that, I enjoy seeing flawed but strong characters such as your take on Bella. Though she makes mistakes, I don't find myself becoming frustrated or annoyed with her, because there always seems to be a solid rationale behind them in terms of Bella's character development. The other thing I quite enjoy about this story is that it has more than the normal level of 'will they, or won't they get their shit together' doubt. I'm very grateful you haven't handed us a HEA on a platter.

Thanks!

Oh my how I love this story. Im not sure which author pimped it out because I read lots of TwiFic but im so glad I took note. I've been reading it on the sly at work on my cell phone. Thats how addicted I am. Cant wait for the next chapter.

I, for one, love you right now! I don't want to get ahead of myself here because I have no idea what might be coming in future chapters, but I am glad that Mike made Bella stop (not that it mattered to me if they did have sex, I just respect Mike more for it). I don't think she's really ready to start a full-blown affair with Mike because she still has Edward in her system. In my ideal world, E&B would have this summer to work it out and start fresh. I actually feel a little sorry for Edward because we've seen what an ass his father is, and I know he's really been working hard to clean up his act. I'm E&B all the way, so that is really the only option for me. I think they deserve a fair shot at it. But, I'm not in charge here and I do trust you - I think? Thanks for the update, hurry back please!

OMG. So intense. They are both stupid.

It's really hard to attempt to like Edward and Emmett. Why they gotta be Aggies? :) Love this story!

"I miss you." I've never heard him say anything like that to me; so simple and sweet.

"I'm here," I respond quietly, our eyes on each other." ..."I mean ... I miss being with you." - He said it:)

"I think you know what you want, B, but what you want might not be the best thing for you in the end. I think you want Edward, but know it should be Mike." "He pauses, smiling at me. "See how it plays out, but be conscious of the fact that it's unfair to keep Mike waiting if you're pining for Edward. All of us just want you to be happy, no matter what that means." - i think jasper said it best.

"I couldn't sleep and wanted to see if you were still up," he admits, squeezing his eyes shut. "If you knew how hard it was for me to keep myself from coming in there and kicking the shit out of him..." he shakes his head, probably trying to rid himself of the mental image." - Damn, he has changed. He didn't charge in there and beat Mike up (not that he has a right to do that).

Great chapter. Thank you for writing.