Reviews for Summer of Salt
java001 chapter 14 . 2/19/2010
oh I do love you! and I love Edward! but I hate Bella now...lol
Cullenary chapter 14 . 2/19/2010
I think it was a great chapter! Completely realistic and I am really glad to see Bella not jump back in the sack with E-and I think her and Mike have been honest and real with each other and its refreching to see them be so in touch mentally...we don't always get to chose who we love-sometimes its just fate...Thanks for writing!
2402a chapter 14 . 2/19/2010
Totally love you.

For many reasons. One updating when you said you would.

Two-not making Bella a wimp. But making her a girl who is confused by sti shows some dignity. Who wouldn't mess around with a hot man she loves just not in that way. When she figures it out she stops.

But she also doesn't fall so easily for Edward. She knows what she wants but also has some standards. Good for her.

Mike oh mike. I do like him. He is a great guy. I thank you for not makinghim a cliche.

Edward is trying. It's obvious but he still has a little work to do.

And Jasper. Doesn't say much but when he does it counts.

Awesome chapter
EdwardsBrunette2 chapter 14 . 2/19/2010
I think it's good he heard them. He deserves it. He needs to hurt like she did. Maybe there won't be a next time;-)
kellilly chapter 14 . 2/19/2010
You already know how I feel about this story! uhmazin!xoxo
BelleDean chapter 14 . 2/19/2010
he, he, he...paybacks a bitch. I'm glad E can see this now!
Raewright chapter 14 . 2/19/2010
I don't know. I'm feeling pretty satisfied now. Edward needed to get a tiny taste of his own medicine.
hnwhitlock2000 chapter 14 . 2/19/2010
can't wait for more!
squarepancake chapter 14 . 2/19/2010
I really hate Edward. I for one haven't forgiven him, and a few months of reform really don't make up for the Tanya situation or the fact that he still went back and fucked anything that moved for a semester. Frankly, I think he's a terrible person. He's not given Bella any reason to think he's changed, and he still doesn't understand how harsh the Tanya situation was for Bella. They've not been together for 9 months when Bella was with Mike. Much different than a passionate summer brought to a screeching halt like Bella experienced.

Edward may be what Bella wants, but I think she should keep looking for a bit before deciding that.
RoseArcadia chapter 14 . 2/19/2010
Is it bad that I'm glad Bella got her revenge, but I also feel bad for Prickward?
ilovedonuts chapter 12 . 2/18/2010
Ok, I am kind of dissapointed that Bella kissed Mike, he's gross. Can't wait till the next chapter.
MiCullen chapter 13 . 2/17/2010
Just found your story and couldn't stop reading... it's really good, ow... and I really liked this version of Mike which is a first...lol

can't wait for more!
Cullenary chapter 8 . 2/17/2010
atta girl alice! And this fianlly brought the tears for B...and I can't wait for Rose to get a piece of Edwards ass on a stick! If I was B I wouldn't even go-I'd say I was gonna and then not show...make an excuse on a phone call so everyone didn't pester the crap out of me...so hard...Thanks for writing!
2loveybunnies chapter 13 . 2/17/2010
What do you mean by more Mike Newton "action"? Should I be scared? Because honestly, a tatted up Mike with a weird surfer haircut is scaring the crap out of me right now! Ha ha ha, I know this should be interesting, but the thought of him there with all of them and Edward bristling the whole time is just...gah! I know you have a plan, and I'll trust that plan, but I don't know.

This chapter made me a little sad, because I really wonder if they will be able to move past what happened last summer. Mike coming up is only going to complicate things for Bella. Hopefully is will clarify things too. These people need to go out and do something besides sitting around watching movies every night! It's summer vacation after all. Maybe a little adventure will loosen them up?
Cullenary chapter 7 . 2/17/2010
this is whats holding me together right now: "Also, please note that I am a fan of a strong female character, so don't worry about Bella. She'll pull it together and redeem herself for not slapping the crap out of Edward."

Thanks for writing!
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