Drinking, vicodin indulging, pot smoking virgin B... what a combination! Well, minus the virgin part now I guess. The water theme I guess was borrowed from SM's BD?

indeed underage drinking! hope B doesn't let E dick her around.

vicodin helps with hang-overs? i had no idea! Cute chapter... you confirmed all my prejudice - football players are usually assholes. Hope E develops some redeeming qualities, right?

Ron Jeremy - classic - LOL. Quarterback... mmh, football player, he?

Hope B didn't do anything she might regret!

i didn't know i had to wait 15 seconds to submit another review...haha, me and my fast clicking.

but this chapter was so angsty and poetic, and reminds me of why i started reading (and fell in love with)fanfiction. the character is so RAW, and there's something so emotional about hearing their thoughts. i cried during the last two chapters. they were so intense. the scarf is a grandma gift, but you make it seem so sensible and im really glad edward appreciated it, and came to his epiphany quickly. as for the tiffany's...well, what girl could resist tiffany's?

im so glad he's finally figured out he loves her. it's like the friggin elephant. and i cant wait to see what he does next

btw, love what you did with the parents, putting carlisle and esme together.

and changing the name to emmett sr. haha. appropriate. and the idea of a douche for a dad is awesome. explains a bit about edward.

i notice you haven't updated in a while, and i hope you havent abandoned the story after a just pulled a latenighter writing 10 consecutive reviews!

alright, i'm feeling rather accomplished.

hope a new chapter comes soon! but no pressure or anything...

ballsy move for bella, unmasking him in front of all the parents, but cant say im surprised, or disappointed. as you can see from my last review i jumbled up some plot points but that's cuz i already read the story, so sorry :(

i think it's great how edward writes a sweet little email on new years after a disappointing lack of action over christmas, but i really enjoy how you're taking the characters through maturity first.

too bad bella doesnt reply :(

this chapter moves really fast...and i get it, because in heartbreak there's a lot of time unaccounted for. and i've been conjuring up scenarios for bella to get back at edward, but im glad you let her take the high road.

i love how alice got famous and ripped Royce a new one. :D

and bella's cold yet passionate speech...way to go!

though it's a little disappointing to see what bella succumbed to.

ugh, i HATE edward and tanya so much right now. i got all red eared and pissed off reading this chapter because i GET the jealousy bella has and it's so empowering reading about her trying to get over it but it's so REALISTIC how everything crashes down and this is perfect because it mixes the good and the bad.

rose, jas, emm, and alice are the best friends in the world. wish they could come alive.

ugh, i cant believe edward did it with a bunny AND tanya. that's just... ugh.

heartbreaking how bella left...

poor lonely bella. :(

but i love how you make her more independent and not tripping over herself wanting to go to texas with edward.

makes the story even more perfect.

and then there are those bittersweet innocent naive moments of "it's the best day ever" that is the total prediction that some sh*t's about to go down.

and it does.

with stupid tanya.

it's always tanya...

never woulda pegged feisty bella as a virgin, but great authors are full of surprises. still loving their banter. and UST.

i hate how edward has a kinda-sorta lucky lady at home.

but that's just the bellward in me talking. because they'll always be the eternity ad.

but this story is perfect in its own right, and im not gna mess with that.

still, it's nice to see him struggling to keep himself in check.

skip the prix, go to chapter 6!

hahaha i'm so so glad i read this after the next chapter was posted, or i would've driven myself crazy thinking "OMG IS HE GONNA KISS HER?"

dang, that makes me sound so ditzy.

but anyway, your writing it still flawless, and the character buildup is amazing, as always.

i think it's really sweet how he has these moments of weeknesses around bella.

but these fairytales...never happen in real life :(

*dance&sing*Chapter five, do the jive, speed all the way home on that plain old drive

Ugh, enter Assholeward. And we have the complete compilation of the many faces of edward. :D

this chap was awesome. i love seeing a strong bella, even if she is a quivering mess of hormones on the inside. and all the unresolved sexual tension! man, if that sh*t implodes...

oh, i laughed SO HARD at "Charlie in a speedo"

one of my favorite lines in Fanfiction. of all time.

chapter 4, here i come..

hey again,

we all love a mystery, and you've just created the perfect Mysteryward here. And this chap gave me a great idea for a game i want to play with my friends. wording and beautiful scenery still strong, as well as the fantastically developing plot.

on with chapter 3... :)

Wow, i haven't given reviews in a long, long time, mainly because the stories i read kept getting blander and blander. But i actually read your story on Twilighted, and after i finished, i couldn't help but start at the beginning, just so i could review each chapter because you are an AMAZING writer, and this plot has been set up so beautifully and perfectly that it made me smile just reading it. it's realistic and captivating, reminds me of the summers i spent in Cali when i was young. Your words flow so well, and i love how your characters are so unpredictable, and not the typical "alice is my best friend and she's happy and giddy...". definitely something i loved about this story. and you use perfect spelling throughout. :)

i could spend a long time on details gushing about the phrasing that's so poetic it makes my heart smile.

if fanfic gave ratings i'd give it a 10 out of 5. it's so good, and i love how you're taking it so far.

on to chapter 2...

hello there... just found your story via the PTB-Authors forum. I've only read the first chapter so far, but I like it. It's well written and the set up for the story is interesting.

Cheers,

Belle