Really good set up...can't wait to see where you take the story.

Found your story rec'd on Twilighted and you have caught my attention in this first chapter.

he's a real boy after all and he has feelings and he thinks he loves her, i lik it, i like that it took him some soul searching to figure it out, i like that he just doesn't jump into it, it took them more than a chapter to build rome, i like the sespense of them not togre than i do them actually being together, t makes their come together all the more beautiful

This is one of the reasons why I love fanfiction, you can get into people's heads. It is so gratifying being let in on the emotional awakening of someone like Edward. I have truly enjoyed your first ten chapters and I'm looking forward to chapter 11.

I'm somewhat relieved that there wasn't any more interaction between them. And the one that took place was beneficial to the story. A reconciliation would have seemed rushed and now the foundation has been laid out.

Just read this story today and am so engrossed in it, whoa an apology from Edward! Way to go Bella the "raging douchebag" comment had my hysterical! Cannot wait to see what happens with Edward!

Every EPOV is shining more light on what's making him act the way he does. I was trying to guess how you would bring them back together, if Jacob would be a football player on another team coming into Bellas life and reuniting them at a game or something like that. Luckily you went in a better direction. :) Good for Alice!

I might have used my ouch a little bit to early... I've always found it a bit strange to drop someone you like and have history with at an instant, but did he have to sleep with Tanya! That one was hard to read but I'm all for anything that brings something to the story and this made it interesting. You could go in so many directions! I really think that Bella held her own. It's not always a sign of weakness to show your hurt and she did good. Now I'm really wondering about what's going on inside Edward?

Yeah, this chapter weighed heavy. Ouch!

It was great to get a glimpse of Edwards mind. I appreciate when fictional characters are allowed the complexity that real people have. The fact that Edward is cocky and arrogant at times, shouldn't have to mean that that is all he is. I think that your story has that quality of making them into someting more than one dimensional characters. The scene in the water was beautiful.

This is good! Reading it I can see it all so clearly. I like the conflicting emotions and that they aren't completely head over heels (yet). The title was what hooked me first and now I keep on reading cause I can literally feel the pull between Bella and Edward. It's gonna get interesting finding out what's holding Edward back.

I am quite taken by this QB1. He seems to be a cocky bastard but there is definitely more to him and I can't wait to find out. Thanks for writing this, it heats up the cold winter in Sweden.

This Edward intrigues me!

I really like the set-up for your story and the mention of the Black Keys just verified that this will be good. :)

LOVE THIS! To little to late, Edward!