Reviews for The Date
ayami chapter 1 . 8/6/2012
i love it and i liked it..hahaha..not being mean but sometimes i get annoyed by aeris' attitude..but she is sweet sometimes..just pushy sometimes..thanks for sharing ! please make more CloTi ! i love them and i love your work ! so keep it up? :)
cookies18 chapter 3 . 11/27/2010
I checked your profile and found this story. Gosh, I totally missed the voting part. Me want more! But why Tifa's dad hates Cloud so much? That guy that stood Tifa up must be stupid. Lol. But thanks to him, Tifa met Cloud. I wonder how will Aerith react if she found out that Cloud found a new girlfriend so fast. *haha* Really looking forward to a sequel to this story, if you are writing any. :)
Lord Divestre Croft chapter 3 . 4/26/2010
Not exactly your best fanfic...

The reunion and the make-up was sweet and all, but the seperation was a little nonsensical. I wouldn't trick my best friend in the whole world just because my father is a freaking nutcase. There'd have to be a better reason than that.
MonkeyPanda chapter 2 . 2/26/2010
OMG KARMIE THIS IS SO CRAZY EPIC! The tension is so thick! And I absolutely LOVE the amount of detail, so perfect! This story is great! I can't wait to find out what happens next! And I'm sorry it took SO LONG for me to get to this Dx

Anyways! I can't wait to find out what happens next! Gonna finish it tomorrow! It's an awesome story, and I love it 3!
Yumi Reitenshi chapter 3 . 2/21/2010
Aww, they didn't do the nasty. How disappointing (in a joking manor.) It was a very cute chapter ang definatly can't wait for more.
vLuna chapter 3 . 2/21/2010
Well, they ended up in bed but... ;D I'm glad everything ended well!
Stryper chapter 3 . 2/21/2010
Great Start! I'm already dieing to see what happens!

Update Soon!
cloudlover2989 chapter 3 . 2/20/2010
super great i really wish the next chap was up
mom calling chapter 3 . 2/20/2010
Well, BPMK, you had me going. I was-in my mind-firing off a blistering 'review' saying that these two knuckleheads were seriously misinformed about their own body language. What they were doing towards the end did not sound like "I'm not ready yet" to me and I was all set to blister your ears for not honoring their stated boundaries-or at least Tifa's...but I shoulda known you would have all your ducks in line. Everything's cool and they wrapped themselves up in each other and the comforter and there will be time enough for the physical stuff. Though maybe not for me. I'm exhausted and all frazzled. Thanks for this and may you be as content as these two knuckleheads are. And may you have as much fun as I'm sure they're going to! mc
kerapal bubbles chapter 3 . 2/20/2010
Yay for happy endings! :D
cloudlover2989 chapter 2 . 2/16/2010
i hope the next chap is out like tomorrow lol can't wait for more
vLuna chapter 2 . 2/16/2010
The tension in the car was palpable. Please hurry up with the next chapter!
Yumi Reitenshi chapter 2 . 2/15/2010
That was the meanest cliff hanger ever. Almost tops the ending of Sopranos, Bravo. I can't wait for the next chapter, whenever it may be.
linegenrou chapter 2 . 2/14/2010
I'm very happy that you updated this story.I'm very excited for it.
mom calling chapter 2 . 2/14/2010
Lots of rumination going on in Cloud's mind. I thought I'd jump thru the monitor! Think what it was like in his car on the way to his place! Next-and last-chapter coming up? Yes, please. We wants more. More clarity, more info, more of them. thx mc
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