|Reviews for It's A Wheelderful Life|
| nightline chapter 8 . 2/6/2011
| nightline chapter 7 . 2/6/2011
For some strange reason, I thought this was the last chapter (yeah, I know, way to overlook the "next" button) - and I was so scared. Still shaking, actually... But now I'm gonna read the last chapter and feel better :-) This story is just amazing. I love how you turned "It's a wonderful life" into something more dramatic and so totally Artie...
| gimmeachancetofly chapter 8 . 9/4/2010
Wow this story was sooooo good! All of your Artina stories are! Great job!
| Proud Marry chapter 1 . 6/16/2010
So, since "when you're broken" and "baby blue eyes" I've been digging your glee (artie/tina) stories, and Damn! you're Amazing!
and thisone is just really intense, you dig artie's character really well,and although I haven't watche the movie you refer,I still get the point, and somehow I feel like this story mustbe better than the movie :p
I'm really looking forward for other amazing Artie/Tina Stories.
Keep writting about them please. you'remy favorite author in ffn!
| ohheythereinterwebs chapter 5 . 6/16/2010
Ugh, jesus. That nightmare... spooky stuff. I got chills reading that, *VERY* creepy.
And cute ending paragraph.
| gigundoly chapter 8 . 1/7/2010
Very clever story! I loved that you made use of Patches in such a creative way. The way Artie reacted after seeing his brother was so touching, as was the scene with Artie at his mother's grave. And I thought it was very interested at how Tina was so much more anti-social and so much darker and sadder without Artie. Very poignant.
| shutupgreenberg chapter 8 . 12/31/2009
Yay! The only thing that could have made this better would have been a steamy makeout session at the end, but that's okay :)
| Calli Wall chapter 8 . 12/26/2009
| Kyra Adelaide chapter 8 . 12/25/2009
Sorry it took so long for me to review, Christmas is just so busy! But Oh My God, this was the perfect ending to the perfect story. Like, seriously, I don,t think I've ever liked a story so much. This should be a movie! Or at least an episode of gLee! They might need to tone it down a bit, because this was just so raw and honest and wonderful (wheelderful, haha), but it was so amazing! I'm out of words, to say, I need a thesaurus...
Oh! I watched It's A Wonderful Life last night! Did you know it's a three hour movie? But man, it's GOOD. However, the whole part about what his life would be like without him is only, like, 10 minutes long! Normally I wouldn't really care (because the rest of the movie was also amazing) but this was the description; "A man contemplating suicide gets a chance to see what life would be like without him." Okay, what about the rest of the movie?
Now to review the actual chapter...
At the beginning, I was like "Oh my god, it's not gonna be all happy and good! Artie's really disappearing! But then Tina was there, and I was like YAY! Happy Happy Joy Joy! And then there was all the cuteness and fluff between Artie and Tina, which just made me smile more and more (as soon as I realized Artie was gonna be okay, I don't think I stopped smiling for the entire thing (and 10 minutes afterward))
When he was like "O, a bell rang, something good happened" I was like "O-okay, that's kinda odd", but then I watched It's A Wonderful Life and the little girl reminded of the old saying "Every time a bell rings, and angle gets his wings"! Yay, Patches got his wings! Happy ending for all! But who will bark at Brittany's mom? Lima is going to miss the barking homeless man, mark my words...
Oh, and the white gloves in his pocket we're a VERY nice touch. I was thinking maybe it was just a dream, but then he found the gloves and I actually gasped and my cat ( who was sitting on my shoulder) freaked out and tried to jump of, but because he panicked, his claws grasped into my skin and, well, I don't think I need to go into detail. Reading your stories always seem to get me injured (or attract the attention of creepy old men, which makes me wait half an hour in -20 C weather while it's snowing). But yeah, it was great, because it was like OHMYGOD IT REALLY HAPPENED! Maybe they'll be magical and never get dirty...
The little part at the end was super cute, widening my smile even further (which I didn't think was possible).
Oh, just a side though! Even when my cat tore my freaking shoulder open (never let a cat sit on you while wearing a peasant top), I couldn't help but smile, because this chapter was so damn amazing! My mom thinks I'm crazy or emo or something now...
So I guess that's the end of my long-ass review. It'll also be my last review for this story :'( I'm glad everything worked out okay, but at the same time, I'm really sad to see it go. I've never enjoyed a story so much, and I'm gonna miss checking every ten minutes for an update. But thank you so much, it was a treasure to read this.
Last thought, I promise! My my, my reviews seem to get longer and longer don't they? Sorry about that :P Write another story and you might end up getting a damn novel!
| Poemwriter98 chapter 8 . 12/24/2009
How sweet! I love the ending. It was adorable, I'm so glad that Artie's okay! :) Great job writing this wonderful story!
| loveyoumeanitbye chapter 8 . 12/24/2009
So precious! Love it!
| xnerdark chapter 8 . 12/24/2009
Merry Christmas. I woke up to the update in bed. Not an exciting location most of the time ha.
I love your Patches.
It's nice to see Artie take initiative when it comes to him and Tina. Don't see that enough. You had that in your fluff piece from the other day. BTW I had the quote about him only wanting his clothes off willingly because that was automatically an innuendo for me lol. I had forgotten to include it in my review. I had it pasted in a text doc. and I left it opened on my laptop, so luckily none of my early ass Christmas guests went online while I was asleep and saw that quote. They would've thought I was a creep. It's definitely natural for Tina to be the aggressor because she kissed him, but he's the one that brought up his penis lol. I hope I didn't go off into too much of a tangent.
"Tina smirks a little. “Well I don’t think I’d be quite that bad, but you definitely have made my life much better." I liked that because people don't want to imagine themselves that bad or dependent on someone too much.
Aww... the last line.
This story was so fulfilling. The fact that we see the same colours in this is weird, but maybe through your words in some way it subconsciously translated. Thank you for this wonderful holiday fic. It'll be a classic.
| StarCrossedLovers123 chapter 8 . 12/24/2009
This was the most amazing story ever! I'm sad to see it go, but I totally loved it! Merry Christmas!
| Char-chan chapter 8 . 12/24/2009
AW that was SUCH a sweet ending _ oh Patches, you are magical- getting Artie to appreciate his presence in this world ;) hehe
| debraelq chapter 8 . 12/24/2009
You did an amazing job with this story. I don't think it was too dark at all. It really emphasized how different it would be in a world without him. Great job! Thanks for writing this. :)