|Reviews for hard times|
| Suki-Alanna chapter 1 . 8/11/2011
Hi! Suki-Alanna here. :) Okay, was that nice enough? I'll be bitchy in a few seconds.
Okay, what the fuck is this? I'm sorry, hon, but this is ORIGINAL. Try if you want to post original shit. Ignore all the good comments, because this really isn't good. You have a two liner about a character that nobody cares about. I'm here to read "Along with the Ride" fanfiction.
Lastly (I'm in a hurry, otherwise it would be a lot longer), nobody cares if this is your first story. You really need to get a beta, and work hard to get something good. Not...this.
So, I'm done now. Feel free to shout and throw things now.
| Team James 123 chapter 3 . 4/17/2010
wow no fair .
| Team James 123 chapter 1 . 4/17/2010
wow love it.
| Whitlock.Mason.McCarty.Cullen chapter 3 . 3/10/2010
i could have SWORN i reviwed this chapter! oh well... LUV IT! Cliffy much? haha! update soon. :)
| Whitlock.Mason.McCarty.Cullen chapter 2 . 2/6/2010
I love this! i don't even know the series your writing with, but i like it. the girl, lillian, sounds kool. ha-ha! i like the sound of her hair! :)