|Reviews for The Ocean|
| Zachary Finnius O'Leary chapter 1 . 7/3/2013
Oh my God. My heart is so broken right now. Thank you for this story. It is so fitting after what I just went through.
| xImperfectPerfectionistx chapter 1 . 6/1/2011
Oh you and your angst.. ;_;
| Dxilph chapter 1 . 3/17/2011
this touched my heart more than almost anything else in the entirety of the internet... im gonna have to go find something that makes me cheerful now, later.
| MARVELCOMICS chapter 1 . 1/1/2011
Oh my Kira... You killed me with this. Just broke my heart. I even cried a little... Though I tried realy hard not to. I know I keep sating the same old crap in my reviews, but... Thanks for writing this.
| pretentious kneecap chapter 1 . 8/26/2010
Ahhhhh, I knew almost right off the bat that Mello was really alone.. I liked the story, it was short but effective.
| Miss Bright chapter 1 . 8/2/2010
Ugh. Even though I knew from the very beginning that he was talking to himself, I cried. Cremation just doesn't sit well with me, the thought's unbearable.
Best line: "...all that was left of my Matt." The 'my' pushed me over the edge. ;-;
| crispybutts chapter 1 . 7/14/2010
great. now i'm on the verge of tears D':
| PercyJeevas chapter 1 . 6/19/2010
This made me cry ! And it was really well written , too !
| Holli chapter 1 . 6/15/2010
This. Made. Me. Cry.
HOWEVER it was very good. Great job *sniffs*
| Middle-Earth Muggle chapter 1 . 4/12/2010
Oh, god, I had no idea. . . Matt. But he really was there, wasn't he? Next to Mello in the plane, in the taxi, walking down to the beach. Physically, I mean. In a twisted sort of way. The ashes. . . oh, man. And maybe he was there in spirit, too. I'd like to believe so.
| Death'sLullaby chapter 1 . 1/13/2010
I usually don't do reviews, but this story was too great NOT to. The first time I read this I got teary eyed and sent it to my Matt. Now, on my millionth time of reading it, I still fight teary-eyedness XD
Basically what I'm trying to say is, this is really extremely awesomely great and I think you're a really great writer. [I've read most your other fanfics, so I can say that ]
| XxGothicChocolatexX chapter 1 . 1/9/2010
Wow i know it was short but i really liked your story you did it really well ending nearly made me cry i love Mello and Matt storys you should write some more lol x
| AlchemyOtaku0922 chapter 1 . 12/26/2009
I figured it out halfway through D I feel so proud of myself _ Really sad story. Good job, as always.
| Tsuki3 chapter 1 . 12/24/2009
I love your fanfics so much.
I just reread Mistakes We Knew We Were Making, then came across this one.
I almost started crying at the end! That was so sad and I was like "Wtf is wrong with that lady?" at the beginning, but then I went back to read that part again to look for some sort of...anything...from Matt. :(
I'm going to continue reading your 13-part series so DON'T STOP. K
| Lucidique chapter 1 . 12/23/2009
Pardon my language, but... What. The. Fuck. That made me cry. Sure, I cry at the drop of a hat, but that actually made tears run down my face. I'll be over there now, rolled up in a little ball and sobbing.