|Reviews for FateBlack Reflection|
| Lareath chapter 7 . 4/14/2010
I love your story. I can't really say that I have any helpful criticism, so instead I'll mention an idea: consider carefully what, if anything, you want to happen when Shirou and/or Archer see Zangetsu. Specifically what happens when their reality marble tries to incorporate it.
There's all sorts of weird features to this to consider: Zangetsu being sentient, a fragment of Ichigo's soul, and having the capability to perform Konso and send souls to Soul Society (though that is only relevant to Archer). There's more but I think you get the idea)
Now for wild speculations: non-Magi that are born with Reality Marbles (and thus never use them or bind them to a artificially imposed circuit on their soul) are the ones that become Shinigami in death.
Further speculation: The reason Shinigami can be relatively so powerful is that they are empowered by multiple sources
| GN00QuanTa chapter 7 . 4/13/2010
I love it! I wounder what everyone will think of Ichigo when he releases his bankai and uses his hollow mask. Oh will you have Ichigo's second hollow form in their? And what will he think when he finds out rider is medusa?
| Grinja chapter 7 . 4/13/2010
Oh man this chapter was too awesome. First off, Shirou vs Berserker was great! I liked how smug Ichigo was when facing him, and how stunned Rider was that he was fighting him so easily.
Definately looks like Shirou is going down the Fate route in this one so far. I can't wait to see what happens when Shirou and Rin meet Ichigo. Will they consider him a larger threat then everything else? I could see everyone teaming up to try and take him down since he is by far the strongest. However I think Shirou and Ichigo would probably get along well. They both like to protect people.
If Ichigo could manhandle Berserker in Shikai, I guess none of the servants are powerful enough to pose much of a threat. I guess Assassin could always try and catch him offguard, or Lancer could sucker him with Gae Bolg, but other then that I don't see how he could possibly lose.
| Farm7455 chapter 7 . 4/12/2010
That was fun!
You've managed to nicely bridge the differences between Fate Stay Night and Bleach, and most of all not make it boring!
I like the differences in the Canon of FSN and how its still managed to follow its basic course with Ichigo and company mixed in.
Also, I find confused Rider to be utterly cute, as she's trying to figure out Ichigo's wacky powers and absurd amount of firepower.
I can't wait though for the rest of the Squad to get into it though. I know Rin is going to be highly annoyed by Ichigo's rejection of the "Rules" of the game. Especially when others get into the fights. I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter, and I wish you luck in writing it!
| Mauritius chapter 7 . 4/11/2010
(These chapters just seem to get longer and longer, don't they? )
I find that to be a good thing. At least that's my opinion.
I love how you describe the battle between Ichigo and Berserker. It's well written that I can understand what's happening: the sound, the visuals, and the pain. I can feel it all in my mind.
( This area is surrounded by a Boundary Field )
Illya can do this too but she has something else in it. Her barriers also plant a suggestion "There's nothing here" or "don't come over this way". So normal humans rarely see her in battle unless they have something that can break barriers, like the Mystic Eyes of Death Perception found by Ryogi and Tohno Shiki.
Also, Caster was probably watching that battle. She'll need to move cautiously now. I still kinda feel sorry for her though. Her original master making her do all those... trivial tasks...
For a moment, I thought you had copied and pasted directly from Mirror Moon translations until a read a few more sentences.
( Death was apparently quite pretty. )
I love this line.
Awesome, the Akashic Records were mentioned. This reminds me, and I'm just curious, but what relation does Bleach have with the Mystic Eyes of Death Perception? It's just this seems similar to Soul Reapers, but with live huma-beings.
Illya gets two Onii-chans. :D Funny that Emiya and Ichigo have a similar meaning to their names. If I recall correctly, I think Emiya means Guardian or something... though I used Google translate at the time...
| animelover1993 chapter 7 . 4/11/2010
OMG YAYAYAYAY NEW CHAPTER! omg i was laughing in glee when Ichigo was well overpowering Berserker. OH I'm so interested as to what will happen to Rider when Ichigo goes Bankai on whom ever pisses him off enough.
Thank you for the new chapter!
| minaseiko1 chapter 7 . 4/11/2010
Love your story. The way you mixed both Bleach and Fate is good. I also liked that he became Rider's master instead of Sakura. The fight with berserker and ichigo is verily detailed. Illya's still ruthless as ever as she just played with ichigo and now going for a round 2 with shirou. Update soon! D
| Belthasar chapter 7 . 4/11/2010
Hmm, how will they get out of that I wonder.
| thefarmguy chapter 7 . 4/11/2010
nice chapter, great detail on the fights and what's going on in the plot/story. I'm half way guessing that Ichigo's hollow mask is probably a bit of over kill after reading what you have written so far. otherwise I'm looking forward to your future chapters. P.S. that was good length on the chapter.
| Thyrokio chapter 7 . 4/11/2010
| Ancestor's Dragon chapter 7 . 4/10/2010
Sweet, new chapter. I thought Berserker was a bit underplayed during his fight with Ichigo, but well, it is Ichigo after all. Well, good job with this chapter, I look forward to reading the next
| draconichero21 chapter 7 . 4/10/2010
Yammy's long lost little brother LOL
Until you made that statement about Ichigo not using Bankai, I was actually chanting the word in my head the moment he had Rider take off
Ilya calling Ichigo a cheater was so cute
Man Ichigo is EPIC! That was one heck of a Shikai Getsuga Tensho
I love how Ichigo made it perfectly clear that Mayuri would not be allowed to show up to "examine" Ilya
I loved Rukia's statement of "If there's one thing Ichigo's good at it's breaking the rules"
Sheesh two fights in one night, I guess Ilya doesn't care that Ichigo gave her a rough time she's just gonna plow through Shriou and Saber anyway. I praise Lancer for having the "brains" to NOT fight anymore after Ichigo freaked him out
| L002 chapter 7 . 4/10/2010
Awesome, nice, half of Shikai is an A rank attack. Bankai would kill Hercales 100 over, if Ilya had revealed his identity.
| Logan- Murder of Crows chapter 7 . 4/10/2010
Of course, I already knew it would be. (wink wink)
| ryukadsgc chapter 7 . 4/10/2010
Good chapter, with good chracterizations for everyone. The battles were interesting, hopefully we'll be able to see moments of awesome for everyone.
It will be interesting to see when the overconfidence of Ichigo is cut, and a truly perilous situation comes about like Rule Breaker hitting a zanpaktou, or Gil breaking out Ea.
With Berserker's God Hand, is the theory of it becoming immune to previous things that killed him , rather than just becoming resistant to things, a bit of canon or fanon? If true, then Ichigo would have to speedbiltz really fast like the Nine Lives strike for Shirou, or just put in a single overkill strike like Caliburn did in one swing.
Also sounds like Ichigo is still in the dark about his dad or hasn't told anyone else yet.
I wonder if Ilya would call Ichigo oniichan, or reserve for Shirou alone. IIRC, Ilya did not address any of the girls familarly in the game.
Anyway, may the muses shine upon you.