Reviews for Circle of Influence
Jayla Fire Gal chapter 4 . 7/21/2017
O.O Wow...
Guest chapter 4 . 3/13/2017
Please don't abandon this - its really good!
Quiet Leaf chapter 4 . 9/3/2016
*follows story determinedly* *needs to know what happens next* *would beg you to update except I don't want to be rude*
Le Kawaii Potato chapter 4 . 4/30/2016
Please make more!
DiscontinuedCharacter chapter 4 . 2/11/2016
warmsundae chapter 4 . 12/23/2015
Please, continue! You can't end it like this. Not with that cliffhanger.
Deacog chapter 4 . 11/17/2015
Please update soon
YokaiAngel chapter 4 . 5/31/2015
Love the story update soon!
Guest chapter 4 . 3/21/2015
your story is really good. Please update soon!
Morning-Macchiato chapter 4 . 8/9/2014
Although this is one of your slightly older works (and most probably discontinued), this was a really good read. It's really interesting to see Edward using alkahestry. There are quite a lot of mistakes, but again this is an older work and it's still perfectly readable.

One of "Circle of Influence's" best qualities definitely has to be the way you write the views and feelings of the characters. They get upset at Ed sometimes and even jump to wrong conclusions, which adds to the unfolding drama.

Winry's sudden appearance at the end of chapter 4...Let me guess; Winry's actually a level two akuma that somehow managed to get a hold of Ed's photograph? I've only just began seeing D. Gray Man, so I'm not completely sure.

Also, another interesting and great dynamic is Ed and Allen's developing friendship. Kudos!
alchemyfreak42 chapter 4 . 5/12/2014
Okay, holy crap holy crap holy crap! Please update soon; this is really good!
KillerOfPotatoes chapter 4 . 5/7/2014
Please please update. I don't know why you've given up on this story, it's wonderfully written and has an amazing plot. Please? :(
incarnate of evil chapter 4 . 3/28/2014
This has been really good so far, nice long chapters and the story is merging well. I do wonder why Ed can do alkhestry but not alchemy though. I also have to wonder how Ed actually got to another world anyway, I hope you will explain next time as Winry has now appeared. Hope you update really soon! :) you have had loads of time to write a new chapter. :)
Sleepybutterfree chapter 4 . 2/11/2014
This fanfiction is amazing. Please update it... You last updated it more than one year ago, though... Will you update soon? please?
Carina Quarene chapter 4 . 2/8/2014
Update pweaassee! X(
It's been 2 years!

I been curious too death! X(
Why many nice fictions are discontinued? (Hope this one only HIATUS)
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