Reviews for The Life and Death of Mary Sue
NatNicole chapter 1 . 12/4/2016
So. Freakin'. TRUE! *nods, grinning*
HungerG94 chapter 1 . 2/12/2016
Bandits took everything- everything... I completely lost and I don't know why. I'm liking this so far.
Sekiko chapter 1 . 9/18/2014
This.. this is art. I love how realistic it all is. The way the "Mary-Sue" escaped the Naruto-verse was so bitterly hilarious. And how she gets sucked into another world, makes you wonder: What happens when she dies in "reality"? Reincarnation, perhaps? Or something dreadfully harsh like what she is cursed to endure? It's amazing, I really enjoyed it, and a lovely slap in the face for fanfiction writers..

Careful what you wish for, because the truth just might kill you..
The Writing Prokaryote chapter 1 . 6/30/2014
This is really amazing...
dragoncreators chapter 1 . 12/15/2013
I actually really like this, most self-inserts only have a hint of the gritty reality. If I was ever a mary sue it would be a Doctor Who one, as being a companion requires no more than being a mystery to the Doctor and having a touch of logic and not-so-common sense. I hope to read more of you very cool stories.
LonelyDreamer7 chapter 1 . 12/11/2013
This was freaking fantastic! much more than meets the eye xD
Trying -Helps chapter 1 . 7/17/2013
That was pretty ruff. Really good but ruff (I mean the story not the writting). You really showed me what the universe would be like, you took away so many things we take for granted, I think the worst was the way Kakashi almost killed her and the way the Hokage did kill her, that was brutal beyond belief in a way. Anyway good writing, keep up the good work.
Take the Good Person Test (fourth search result on Google).
vantweet chapter 1 . 1/11/2013
I think this story is awesome!
thumos chapter 1 . 1/11/2013
Wow. That was absolutely amazing.

I love how you put a realistic spin on the old sucked-into-a-different-universe trope that's so disgustingly common on fan sites (I'm an offender too; I won't even bother denying it). Things aren't all rainbows and sunshine, and things don't always fall perfectly into place (but some things, like the language barrier, do, fortunately). You portrayed all of that very well here, and you did an excellent job.
NinaJansen chapter 1 . 11/13/2012
Both funny and realistic, me gusta!
VeganVampy chapter 1 . 11/10/2012
I don't see anything wrong with it. Its a whole different spin on the universe-travel story, and the bluntness makes it seem much more... I guess slap-in-the-faceish. I think this could help many people with their writing, at least in the department of Mary-Sue-ness. It also really brings out what the true nature of a ninja would most likely be, because even I have to admit that I've written them as much too willing to believe a story before. I like this a lot, and I'll probably reference it sometimes in future stories when I think I'm making the characters too OOC. Thank you very much for writing, and I hope you've gotten the praise this story deserves from myself and your other readers.
TheMadKatter13 chapter 1 . 5/22/2012
Well, it was wonderfully written and very well thought out and I wnjoyed that about it. Unfortunatwly, I can't say that I enjoyed the story itself, but that may have been my fault for reading it a bit detachedly, like reading an informational pamphlet.
xXxStrawberry-chanxXx chapter 1 . 2/16/2012
In all honestyhis is one of the most amazing fanfictions I have ever read. SERIOUSLY!

It was insightful, humorous, and very enjoyable. It really ticks me off that I find a whole bunch of crappy Naruto porn fics with so many reviews, but amazing things like this are hardly even recognized!

Please, do the world a favor and become a famous author. You have serious talent. :)
gonyonomaru chapter 1 . 2/11/2012
Wow! What an amazing example of reality vs. Mary Sue. I am so thankful that you wrote this story- it is good for people to read just to know how things go down in the real world. There were so many twists in the plot: little things that no one (except you) would ever think of; for example, the blisters or the way the Maru Sue was treated by the villagers. Brilliant work. :D
Eternal Cat Moon chapter 1 . 12/27/2011
I like the bluntness of this story, it wakes you up (hopefully). However, now my own story looks stupid but I will finish it even if it kills me from the fakeness. Thank goodness I'm going to start a new story that will seem boring but it will be much more real. I hate the fakeness and the reality so know I must choose which one I hate more. Wake me inside (quote from song)

~ Eternal Cat Moon
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