Reviews for 30 Words
skywalker05 chapter 1 . 2/16/2010
Some of these are very good. I like the irony of "dismiss" and lol'ed at "Impulse". But formatting and spelling/grammar errors keep this from being top-notch. I suggest looking over it again. But your sentences themselves are okay: I liked "Fly" a lot as well, how it discusses his acrobatic fighting style.