Reviews for I broke a rule
glassf1re chapter 1 . 8/4/2014
Aw, so sweet!

I love love love luna tiptoeing up for a kiss, and the hiccuping like a dog that swallowed a racoon from Umbridge. Wonderful imagery and I've been sobbing happily since about a third of the way through :)

Thank you for writing this.

Xx
Frenchhornbook chapter 1 . 4/2/2012
omg! your foreshadowing! I thought it was just a legitimate concern that they would have, but oh, no! so much more than that! and drarry, too! I love it!
Smayz chapter 1 . 6/30/2011
I never thought of Umbridge's detention method like that before, but I really enjoyed reading this.
Little bit 1o1 chapter 1 . 6/10/2011
mw like
TheoneandonlyKaorin chapter 1 . 5/27/2011
Remove the sexual slang, put some pretty words metaphorically describing the female body, and you've got the best story ever. I'm glad um not the only one who has ever thought of writing the reverse of Umbitch's punishments.
dawn of the rising phoenix chapter 1 . 4/5/2011
Super cute! Great job.
cethmistmyk chapter 1 . 3/1/2011
AWWWWW, how cute! :-D
SpazzJazz chapter 1 . 2/19/2011
I love this story _ I just recently came into femslash, I was didn't know what I was missing _
Dri Mathews chapter 1 . 10/9/2010
awww! that sooo sweat;)
Selayne chapter 1 . 7/22/2010
The plot was good, but I think that all the persons in this story was out of caracter sometimes, particularly Luna, if her name hadn't been written I wouldn't knew it was her at all. :/
Eryk Lestrange chapter 1 . 6/11/2010
that was so sad, and so heartwarming at the same time!

you should do a sequel!
Kimchi Cake chapter 1 . 12/27/2009
This is absolutely adorable, and I love the ending! 3