Reviews for Shuriken A GIJoe:Sigma 6 Story
Dragowolf chapter 10 . 5/21/2011
Wow! Just caught up with teh story! Its great! I love the interact between Kamakura and Jinx! Its a lot of fun.

And Hi-Tech is soo funny with all his forgetfulness.

Think there will be more eventually? I hope so. This is really good!
Asterisk78 chapter 3 . 12/20/2009
It's always insteresting to see a Sigma 6 story up. I really enjoyed your characterizations; they seemed to really be in character for Sigma 6. My only suggestion would be to make everyone a little more mature and a little less bombastic: I know that's how Sigma 6 did it, but it's a little odd to read. Also, you had a couple of grammar mistakes - were instead of we're, for example - but I would assume that was a typo. Good job and keep writing!


P.S. By the way, when Long Range says "A promise is a promise," he should actually say "Una promesa es una promesa," although I suspect that the literal English translation doesn't really do the man justice. I would suggest "Te prometi (with an accent on the i), y la cumplire (with an accent on the e). This translates to something like "I promised you (that I wouldn't use a needle), and I'll fulfill it."