Reviews for Snackpack
JK chapter 1 . 9/27/2013
Gorgeous...had me drooling D:
himurarikuo chapter 1 . 3/2/2013
Adorable

This couple always ooze sexuality - every move is so elegant .. so your line..

'...going ripshit on Johnny's trapezius...' totally took be by suprise - and worked a treat 3

For some reason Johnny 'straddling Charley's legs' is totally my favourite ...one picture in the first volume had me hooked

You pleased me thoroughly, thank you...

3 Rik
DeviWan chapter 1 . 5/7/2010
I loved it... loved the manga and loved this one-shot. Well done!
Serenityofthematrix chapter 1 . 2/16/2010
this was really good
Blissfulnightmare chapter 1 . 2/13/2010
Absolutely love it! :) A few minor errors, and I highly doubt Cherry would swear other than 'ass' or 'damn', but other than that, it was great.
general zargon chapter 1 . 2/4/2010
This is a great story! I like how you kept Johnny and Cherry in character so well! :) Please write more stories for this fandom! Personally, I'd like to see you write some Johnny/Cherry fluff, but that's just my opinion. _ Anyway, please keep up the great work on your stories! :)
wolfalchemistofmoon chapter 1 . 12/29/2009
OMG I loved it! But Rayflo sama why did you wait so long for meal time with cherry *sees angry Cherry*

...I mean Charles sama!
Guest chapter 1 . 12/29/2009
Really good chapter, keep writing ;)