Reviews for Peeking Sun
Shigure Haruki chapter 1 . 11/3/2014
Hello, Qualyn.

I haven't read this manga untill the end but I like the story and thus your writing brings me joy to the upmost. Even though years have passed since the time this fic was published, allow me to leave a review.

I like this. Izumo and Oguna are in characters. The way you describe their interactions, gestures, and feelings seems official. Oguna is so cute and Izumo is teasingly sweet... So fluffy. Your description is nice and smooth, I love it.

Wish that you'll write more for this pairing.
Thank you so much.

Sincerely,
Haruki
Ozuchi-Kozuchi chapter 1 . 5/8/2011
Cute story. I usually tend to avoid Yaoi but I liked this. You kept them pretty in-character actually.

Thank you for writing for this fandom too! It needs more love!
KeiNishikawa83 chapter 1 . 9/17/2010
Yay yay yay yay yay! YOU ROCK! I've been searching for a fic for these two and this is the only one I've seen! Thank you so much for writing it! It was really quite cute. :3
sataridis chapter 1 . 7/29/2010
Personally, this gender of fiction does not push my buttons ("boy-on-boy" stories)

Still, I found it captivating, smooth.

It relates deeply with the canonic work, "Takeru: Opera Susanoh Sword of the Devil", remaining truthful to the original plot and world of these characters.

Your writing style reveals a personal concern for what is been written, and that contributes with that much magic for the story itself and the reader.

Character development looked realistic, and yet romantisised, as it was supposed to. I enjoyed the most the smooth depictions of their surroundings which instead helped to depict the characters themselves. Theese were nothing but small pieces of poetry which only brought feeling to the atmosphere, making it just right for this events to happen.

(Concerning my deeper "doxa", I'll call it "clean", since you promised a lot "worse" boys love for other writings of yours... And I really suck at reviewing, I'm sorry, Qualyn...)
Otherwise Known As chapter 1 . 6/27/2010
yay! i'm so happy someone finnaly wrote a fic for this manga! and a yaoi one at that! and a GOOD yaoi one too. you. are. awesom!
Lilith Caladhiel chapter 1 . 6/14/2010
This one was really, really cute, Gaby.

Inocent love, when life is uncertain.. How romantic! *.*

And as always I loved the descriptions! However, in Rough Night there were better. :D

I would like just one thing... That your stories were bigger! *.*

I want to read more! weeee

Congratulations! Great work!
Mindless Destruction chapter 1 . 6/6/2010
I do love this pairing. (niko, niko) Anyway, I think your writing style here is beautiful.
Ricardo Oliveira chapter 1 . 1/3/2010
Eu tinha que vir mesmo aqui cá comentar ;)

Ao contrário da outra fanfiction, da sensual e fantasticamente sexual história lemon que escreveste, esta que comento agora está... Bem, para mim foi de certo modo ma história sentimental, pois eu a considero um belo romance, tanto que as primeiras palavras que sairam da minha boca quando acabei de ler foram "Fogo! Que bela história de amor!", e é pura verdade :D

Claro, descreves muitíssimo bem a parte do beijo, e que sensualidade gaby! Eu não sei porquê, deve ser pela mente perversa que tenho, mas imagino logo o que se desenrola dali(atingi o climax quando Oguna "opened his mouth and Izumo slid his tongue in", pois um beijo daqueles não se recebe ou se oferece todos os dias :b

E isso, por incrível que pareça, por detrás deste aparente acto de sensualidade e de uma forte atmosfera sexual, eu considero uma bela história de amor. Porque sente-se isso eu acho. Tu descreves tão bem aquela envolvência de ambos, que é difícil não nos vermos ali no meio, a assistir. Ás vezes até nos arrepiamos e eu claro, pus-me logo a trincar o lábio... Pois, aqui o Ricardo também nao pode ler nada apelativo, que prontos... xD

Tu já sabes bem o que penso da tua escrita, e das capacidades que tens. E na minha opinão sincera, ainda tens muito para revelar, muito mesmo. Estás a ter um arranque e um começo óptimo, até brilhante, para quem não escrevia muito. Mas sabes bem que isso é só mais uma prova das tuas capacidades extaordinárias que possuis e que deves utilizá-las. Lembras-te de gémeos? Eu já descobri três em ti: a tua personalidade e amizade inagualável, a artista da Soares e a escritora promissora. Espero bem descobrir ainda mais :3

Como sempre termino, espero poder comentar ainda muito mais textos, poemas ou fanfictions tuas, pois ler tuas palavras não me cansam, assim como ouvir-te ;D

E mais uma coisa... Um Obrigado sincero por me permitires esse privilégio enorme que é partilhares comigo um pouco de ti :)

Beijinhos minha querida amiga*

Do teu eterno amigo,

Ricardo Oliveira
Little Soldier Mine chapter 1 . 12/26/2009
OMG! I LUV u! For reals! This is the only story i could find about this manga! I absolutly lluv it! And this pairing! But dude the third volume is out isn't it?

Anyways! You should write more! I would love to read it! I luv Oguna!...am i rambling?...yes,yes i think i am...sorry!

Tons-a-luv!
Leyla chapter 1 . 12/25/2009
Aww that was so cute!

At first I didn't know what the manga was so I went to look for it and I really liked it (hope they'll put the 3 and 4th volume).

I really liked you're story D
Deiray chapter 1 . 12/24/2009
It's really good *_* i don't know that Oguna can be so cutee _ I love sensitive yaoi story :D

Do you know where can i find translate vol 3. and 4 takeru opera (...)?

reader./?mOguna-OperaSusanohSwordoftheDevil&c1&p9

that Oguna story. You must read this :))

Ah and sorry for my english ' i know my eng suck .
bLuE chapter 1 . 12/21/2009
well... I was hoping some action, but that turned out great D

It really makes you go "aw" at the end, it's so cute! xD

you've got to make a one-shot for death note D

petty pwease?