Reviews for Façade |
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![]() ![]() ![]() love the story! can u update? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wish it was longer! :'( |
![]() ![]() ![]() Heheh that's funny Ten-Ten moment! Tenny called Kiba a horndog I use that term all the time! It's halrious! Like I said what feels like a thousand times before it was good and funny! Hehehehehe anyway until next time! Always & Forever Angel ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just another amazing story from you... :D love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another good one-shot by you! I really like the KibaIno couple, there are plenty good stories on this couple (I have one myself) and your one-shot just adds to the collection. Another one going to the favorites! The only critique I could give is when you say: When they were younger at Konoha Academy, if you would ask Kiba who Yamanaka Ino was to him; he'd just answer, "The vainest person he'd ever met in his life." Since it is a quote you should say something more like: When they were younger at Konoha Academy, if you would ask Kiba who Yamanaka Ino was to him; he'd just answer, "The vainest person I've ever met in my life." because it is a quote after all. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Simple and took my heart ! really, lv it :-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() D: Sasuke's dead? T_T Besides, that, awesome story :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() i do agree, i think kiba and ino make a good couple but if they do end up in the end, konoha had better be prepared for a lot of explosive fights ( knowing how proud and stubborn both of them can be). i feel bad that you killed off sasuke in this one, but bringing ino and kiba together makes up for that. _ ja, mata ne! |
![]() ![]() ![]() The most imperfect sort of couple that just work. I like this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haha, it was so cute. Makes me want to write my own KibaIno fic. Love Lamb |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know right they look pretty good together, I mean if people just realize how perfect they are together they'll be soo loved, update soon! I totally love Ino Kiba all my stories are about them, I'm babling too much! And update soon. An yeah I love Ino, she's always misunderstood. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Reviews are loved, and this fic is too. :D |