Reviews for Breaking The Surface
mydirt09 chapter 5 . 1/2/2010
One again this chapter makes me wish Hogwarts was really...that or owning a broom. Good chapter and I like how you described the Hippogriffs
pisceanchic101 chapter 5 . 12/31/2009
Oh! I can't wait for the next chapter! This seems so exciting so far!
crazey logic 13 chapter 5 . 12/30/2009
aww they make such a cute couple!
InsufferableKnowItAll61093 chapter 5 . 12/28/2009
AH wow! i love this story! Im assuming the 4th item is their DESIRE for each other. HMM HMM? -nudge nudge- lol but honestly, i really do like this story! wonderful plot! Thank you!
LOL chapter 5 . 12/28/2009
“Now let’s find us some centaurs. What is up with all these half-horse creatures anyways? I bet the Elder Tree is shaped like a horse or has horsehair for leaves or something.”

HAHAH draco cracks me up (: keep it up!
TheLighterBlonde chapter 5 . 12/28/2009


pobrediabla chapter 4 . 12/27/2009
it was a great chapter, keep this tempo! (I think there was bit too much friendliness between them in the 2nd chap)
kidders chapter 4 . 12/26/2009
omg youre so smart! i mean a portkey! come on chapter 5 where are you

i love this story so much (:
dreadfuldelights chapter 4 . 12/26/2009
Interesting story :D

Can't wait for the next chapter~

Hetra87 chapter 4 . 12/26/2009
This story is really interesting! Im really looking forward to the next update!
Ravensnake chapter 4 . 12/26/2009
clever :) i definitely like where this is going! update soon!
mydirt09 chapter 4 . 12/26/2009
Cool plot
TheLighterBlonde chapter 4 . 12/26/2009
loved it!

you should finish this

i mean its just mind taking, makes u want to read more and more


Yanx's Pen chapter 3 . 12/26/2009
aw i really like this! update soon! I'm forcing you too :D
Boo-82 chapter 4 . 12/26/2009
A portkey. Brilliant. And a strong feeling, hm? I'm starting to suspect where this is going. But that doesn't matter because I'm very curious how things are going to be for them in that Hidden Forest, which already sounds so mysterious to me.

Can't wait untill your next update.
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