Reviews for The HalfVampire Chronicles:Part II
MusicLovingQt08 chapter 28 . 7/12/2012
Omg your story just keeps getting better and better I loved the start of your authors note at the end of the chapter, "holy horny Jacob batman" omg that is just too funny, I still cannot believe that a dude is writing this usually it's girls because we're just so obsessed with sexy Jacob black
MusicLovingQt08 chapter 25 . 7/12/2012
Ok I'm dying here you keep giving jake and nessie all these dreams about their kids and have them talk about it but you've had it said in the story that Nessie is infertile, which is it I'm dying to know here, I've Already read a story similar to this called all grown up and it's by vanessawolfe724 and it's a series like yours and Nessie had 5 kids in that one and has had kids in every other one I've read so im dying to know what'll happen for this one.
MusicLovingQt08 chapter 3 . 7/11/2012
Why doesn't she just show everyone what she goes through with her gift that would make it a lot easier for everyone to understand
ciana chapter 9 . 6/19/2012
andy is a a- b- m-f-,-,-
midns chapter 1 . 5/29/2012
I love this story I hope all nessie's pain means she can have kids. I will have to keep reading to see.
PreciousJuls chapter 2 . 3/29/2012
She is still a bratt. It is really hard to like this girl!
Ilovejacob91 chapter 21 . 3/16/2012
Ive read part 3 so why do you keep saying nessie cant have children in your stories? Im just is still an awesome story!
Ilovejacob chapter 17 . 3/13/2012
THANK you!
Ilovejacob91 chapter 15 . 3/12/2012
This story is awesome! But please dont make Nessie cheat on Jacob! I'm begging you!
Simonrac000 chapter 15 . 3/12/2012
This story is awesome! But please dont make Nessie cheat on Jacob! I'm begging you!
Jacob4ever chapter 8 . 2/28/2012
Great story
isis813 chapter 25 . 2/15/2012
i love your storys so much buut why would a boy like you write them
RoxyandZannahMorganvilleRockz chapter 1 . 1/27/2012
This is really good can't wait for reading more. :P
EdwardCullenizor chapter 4 . 1/22/2012
How sad!
EdwardCullenizor chapter 3 . 1/22/2012
When will it be doggy style time?
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