|Reviews for Who says you need a Trainer to be a Champion?|
| A Kitten With A Pen chapter 1 . 6/9/2012
Pokemon OC form
Personality: Playful, Miscellaneous
Move set (Pick as many as you like, no four move limit in this story): Lick Curse Hypnosis Mean look Confuse Ray and Shadow Ball Return
Brief History: He has been with Darkmalia since he was a gastly. He didn't know his parents because he was abanded. He considers Vesper his sister.
Miscellaneous: Has a black braclet on his right arm.
Personality: She is Naive but is mature. She acts alot like her trainer but is almost never speaks even when angered.
Move set (Pick as many as you like, no four move limit in this story): Helping Hand Pursuit Confuse Ray Moonlight Return
Brief History: She was a gift from Violet's father when she was a Eevee though was a egg at the time. Consirders Fuzzy her big brother.
Miscellaneous: A purple bow on her left ear.
Trainer OC Form
Family: Father (devcied)
Hometown (From somewhere in Hoenn preferably): Slateport City
History: Left in Hoenn when her father died and she just grew up with her 2 Pokemon.
Appearance: Long straight black hair with a white line on the left side. She has a model figure. Suntan. And sky blue eyes. A black tank top. A small white skirt and black shorts. A black and white hat.
Personality: She keeps quiet most of the time but if she starts to trust you she will, get a little more vocal. She loves talking about Pokemon. She may not look like it but she is one of the happiest person you will ever meet.
Type (Trainer, Daycare people, etc.): Coordinator
Pokemon (May also use the Pokemon OC Form for you Pokemon):
| enderverse chapter 4 . 10/7/2011
So how is he going to avoid random trainers trying to capture him. Maybe gym leaders wouldn't, but he would probably have half the trainers that battle him along the routes try to capture him if he goes below half HP. Ralts are awesome, who wouldn't try to get him?
He should TK a mannequin or life sized puppet and pretend its his trainer. That would be cool, A Ralts sitting on the shoulder of a large doll moving it around telekinetically.
| Nianque chapter 3 . 7/24/2010
Lol... I'm almost positive that the "Hold a hatred for humans" bit was directed at me, :)
I am sooo happy that you updated, please don't let this story die a gruesome death!
| VastStride chapter 3 . 7/19/2010
I'm loving this story! Emil's story is really cool, and I have a strange addiction with catching Ralts in every game. And I can relate to the problem with sliding doors...when I was young, they really freaked me out.
...Oh Fudge! So you can't submit any more OC's? Aw well. I'll keep reading anyways.
| DelinquentDuo chapter 3 . 7/19/2010
I have something to say about your comments at the bottom.
First, New Super Mario Bros. Wii is a DAMN AWESOME game.
Second, about your towns and cities thing, I find it ironic that "Evergrande City" isn't really a city.
And as far as the chapter goes, I think it's cute that Emil has a crush on that Chansey.
| bookworm6892 chapter 3 . 7/18/2010
short chappie, but lol...
Emil and Alice, sitting in a tree, K-I-S-S-I-N-G XD
it sucks that ur not takin oc's anymore though, but i kinda c ur point. i was readin through the reveiws 2 this, and noticed that most of them were kinda mary/gary -sueish ; but just wonderin, can i still submit a trainer? if so tell me and i'll pm u
| Nianque chapter 2 . 5/16/2010
Ooh... A ralts that has decided to take on the league? Sweet! You might want to delete the OC submission form and put it on a forum, to prevent the site Nazis from deleting it.
Pokemon OC form
Species: Charmeleon (Exposure to Everstone, can't evolve/doesn't want to evolve)
Personality: Very hotheaded, stubborn, and arrogant. She has a major dislike for humans and gives trainers that try a catch her a rather nasty scar. Rude to almost anyone, except those that can beat her in a battle. Not very civil and has an unorthodox way of doing things. Prefers to fight up close as opposed to launching ranged attacks.
Move set (Pick as many as you like, no four move limit in this story): Flare Blitz (Only uses it incase of an emergency, because it hurts her), Dragon Claw, Metal Claw, Dig, Shadow Claw, Fire Punch, Thunder Punch, Sunny Day, and Swords Dance.
Ability: Flash Fire (If not then Blaze)
Brief History: Never really got to know her parents because they were captured when she was still young. Flare was taken in by an old Sandslash who helped her to grow up. When the Sandslash had to tell her about what happened to her parents, she vowed that she would get revenge on humans, deciding that capturing pokemon was a form of slavery and that she would free all pokemon. Occasionally she has dreams of starting a full-fledged revolt to overthrow the human race as the dominant species.
Miscellaneous: Wears a Firestone around her neck.
If you need anything else for this story, I'd be happy to provide it.
| Emily-Of-Midgard chapter 1 . 5/11/2010
I guess I'll put a trainer. If you don't want to put it in, its ok. I tried my best not to make it a mary-sue
Name: Nellie No last name (her actuall name is Nellie Lincoln but she dosn't want her brother to find her, so she introduces herself as Nellie, no last name)
Family: Diego-Brother (28), Felicity-sister-in-law (28)
Hometown (From somewhere in Hoenn preferably): Dewford Town
History: Her parents died when she was young,was rased by Diego, who was a famous trainer in his day. Diego married Felicity two years ago. Nellie hated Felicity so she ran away to Petalburg City.
Appearance: She's about 5"0 tall. She has dirty blond hair cut to her chin. Her cloathing is very worn out, a patched up brown jacket, a worn out purple scarf, a brown shirt and a pair of worn out jeans. She has gray eyes.
Personality: She is very street wise and smart. She has a major attitude but can be respectful to adults if she gets something out of it, like food or water or a bed. Known in Petalburg as the local theif, she'll sweettalk the vendor while her Wobbuffet, Axel, steels their next meal. If she by chance ends up with more then she needs, she'll give it to needy pokemon or children. But she'll always denie her soft spot. Can be VERY sarcastic.
Type (Trainer, Daycare people, etc.): Trainer, but a very poor one.
Miscellaneous: Nellie Dreams of becoming the best Psychic-type trainer ever and someday taking over the Mossdeep City gym after Tate and Liza, her heros, retire. At the moment,
she's trying to figure out a way to get to Mossdeep City. Has a extreem phobea of boats, despite being rased on an island. She also has a hatred of bug type pokemon becausewhen she was a little girl, one bit her and she got very sick. Has a dislike of most trainers, all though she is one herself, because she sees them all as kids that never had to work for anything like she did, so I personaly think she and Emil would get along. Will not capture any pokemon against their will, and the only reason she has Axel and Psy is Axel hatched from an egg she found and Psy asked her to capture her. She thinks pokemon has as many rights as people. Her brother is a psychic type user and he's one of the people Lisa and Tate have on the list to take over their gym. Nellie wants that job more then anything so her own brother is her rival.
Pokemon (May also use the Pokemon OC Form for you Pokemon):
Personality: He is one random pokemon. He gets on Psy's nerves with his clowing. You see a piece of lettus, he sees a hat.
Move set: Counter, Mirror Coat, Safe gard, Destiny Bond
Ability: Shadow Tag
Brief History: Nellie found his egg in the woods. She thought it was just an egg and tried to eat it. Luckly, Psy was there and kept him from becoming Wobuffet breackfast. He hatched soon after.
Miscellaneous: Axel has no clue who is parents are and he just dosn't care. As far as he's consurnd, (Which isn't much) Nellie is is mother. He loves to tick of Psy, but considers her his best friend. Can get protective of his "mother" and will use his moves to protect her.
Name: Psy (her starter pokemon)
Personality: Serious and motherly. She acts like the mother Nellie never had.
Move set: Teleport, Future sight, hypnosis, healing wish, psychic, Magical leaf and dream eater
Brief History: Psy was wondering around two years ago when she heard crying coming from behind a car. Curious, she floted over and found a small, wet from the rain 10 year old gir. Psy, curious to who in there right mind would leave a kid out in the rain, asked Nellie telapaticly who and what she was doing. Nellie explaned her situation. Psy, shocked at her story, told her to capure her using one of her brother's pokeballs and the two never looked back.
Miscellaneous: Detests Axel, but puts up with him for Nellie. Has a weakness for candy.
| Altaria fan chapter 1 . 3/29/2010
K, well, I'll send a Pokemon.
Name: Stratos Skywing
Personality: A lone wolf type. She is stubborn, negative and critical, but usually says such things politely. Quiet and dislikes socializing. Has a huge temper that she finds difficulty controlling. However, she stays calm most of the time. Very protective of her flock.
Move Set: Dragon Pulse, Air Cutter, Sing, Protect, Outrage, Perish Song, Mirror Move.
Ability: Natural Cure
Brief History: The alpha in a flock of Altaria, Stratos is the largest and strongest known Altaria in the wild.
Miscellaneous: 5'1 tall. Also the strongest Altaria in the wild.
| SkyeGavin chapter 1 . 3/10/2010
This is a warning.
Entries not allowed:
5. Any form of interactive entry: choose your adventure, second person/you based, Q&As, and etc. (OC submission)
| Voice of the Forest chapter 2 . 3/2/2010
Here is one more
Name: Ken Motoko
Family: Mother, Father, and a 7 year old sister
Hometown: He lives in Petalburg Forest
History: Before he was 10, he was deathly ill and almost died. Even though he recovered, the docters and his parents fear that Ken's disease will soon return.
Appearance: He has auburn hair cut to the chin and hazel eyes. He wears a red shirt with sleeves pulled to the elbows, tucked in green pants which is tucked in black boots. He also wore four or five silver bracelets on his right wrist.
Personality: He is kind and caring. He has a timid nature but he can be brave to.
Type: Early retired Trainer due to his health and became a Daycare person and doctor for Pokemon.
Male Mighteyna(his starter)
(He is also the only human Brandi Kunkuro, an Umbreon, ever trusted. Brandi even have four silver bracelets on her left front leg, she also has a crush on Ken. OMG!)
| Voice of the Forest chapter 1 . 3/2/2010
Name: Brandi Kunkuro
Personality: She can be sweet and kind, but she can be serious and is sort of a lone wolf.
Moves: Psychic, Protect, Hyper Beam, Shadow Ball, Moonlight, Double Team, and Dig
Brief History: When she was a baby Eevee, her parents disappeared when humans caused a fire where she lived. Believing that humans took her parents away, she had grown a strong hatred towards them. Brandi begin training every night, when humans were not around, in which she became an Umbreon. She doesn't care what happens to herself until she is with her parents again, she always pushes herself pass her limit, which causes her to go into coma-like states, but she often heals herself.
Miscellaneous: She is very swift and powerful, maybe to powerful. Her Hyper Beam attack can even scare a group of Gyrados away. Each she defeats a trainer, she runs off.
| earlymorninglight12 chapter 2 . 2/7/2010
Name: Amethyst Lazuli (Lazuli)
Personality: loves to help another Pokemon. Happy usually,
but hates it when people take families away from each other,
whether it be Pokemon or person. Occasionally likes to flirt
but only to get her way.
Move set (Pick as many as you like, no four move limit in
Brief History: used to be part of a group with Eevee, Glaceon, Jolteon, Flareon, and the rest of the Eeveelutions
(all plural). But left when she got restless and decided to see the world for herself. Have eluded capture and disappointed many Trainers/Coordinators/Breeders.
Miscellaneous: Amethyst Lazuli isn't easy to catch. Her
Confusion can make her seem like she's one place to
another. But usually disappears with a Psybeam in her wake.
Is that good enough? If not, contact me.
| bookworm6892 chapter 1 . 1/9/2010
Name: Samantha (sam for short)
Personality: quiet, shy, only attacks when her or her friends are attacked first
Move set: fire fang, bite, ember, roar, thunder fang
Ability: early bird
Brief History: sam's mom was a houndour that belonged to a champion trainer before the trainer released her for being too weak
Miscellaneous: knows a lot about trainers, wants to try fighting gym leaders but doesn't want to become a trainer's pokemon, she also loves tamato berries
| Flaaffy chapter 2 . 1/4/2010
Alright, I liked this chapter for the most part. To me, it felt a little rushed, with more dialouge than description. You want it to be the other way around - more description is ALWAYS better. :)
As for the OC I promised, here we are
Name: Cinnamon, although her previous trainer sometimes called her Minnie as a nickname. Call her that and she’ll all but rip your head off.
Personality: Cinnamon is very prissy type of Pokémon, and she focuses heavily on her looks. She would refuse to be seen by any male Pokémon until she has sufficiently groomed herself for the day. However, washing herself can be a bit of a problem due to her fear of water and Water-types. She’s a headache and very hard to put up with. Her trainer used to spoil her to no end, and she’s having a hard time adjusting to the wild lifestyle.
Despite the immediate difficulties with having her on the team, Cinnamon’s a deadly useful asset. Her Fire moves are unstoppable and incredibly valuable. She’s a natural powerhouse, being to offspring of a Champion Ninetales. Battling comes easily to her. She thinks quickly and losing is unknown to her. However, is someone on the team were to anger her, she’d be sitting out the next battle just to watch them squirm. She knows she’s needed on the team and often lords this over everyone else’s heads.
She’s got an unbeatable temper. Make one snide comment or innocent criticism her way and you’ll be getting a nice Flamethrower to the face. She can hold a grudge, too – you’d better apologize sincerely, multiple times, before you’re forgiven. She never thinks that she’s in the wrong, and is always quick to blame someone else.
All in all, she’s an annoying, temperamental, but necessary part of the team. Unfortunately, she’s there to stay, whether the other team members like it or not.
Move set: Upon Meeting her, she has Ember, Quick Attack, Will-o-Wisp, Roar, Tail Whip, and Heat Wave (Egg Move, one she doesn’t realize she has). By the end, she’ll have all of the above, plus Imprison, Flamethrower, Safeguard, Payback, Fire Spin, Captivate, Grudge, Fire Blast, Sunny Day, Attract, Dark Pulse, and Energy Ball.
Ability: Flash Fire
History: Cinnamon’s previous trainer, a young teenage boy, trained her mother for a long time, and eventually became Champion with her. After leaving the Ninetales in the Day Care Center for a short while, he came back to find an egg – one that held Cinnamon in it.
He hatched her and raised her well, but his plan was pretty apparent from the start to anyone watching. Cinnamon absolutely adored him, and he was a good trainer to her, always. She never even got a chance to battle with him though, as their time together was very short lived. The day she finally grew her sixth tail, he released her in Fiery Path, where he assumed she’d be content.
Cinnamon was devastated with this. He had released her for her own good – because he was already a noted trainer with a Ninetales, he gained nothing from training a new Vulpix, but someone else would surely love to capture an adorable little fox Pokémon. Had she stayed put, she would have been given a good life with a nice trainer. Instead, she fled.
She ran for as long as she could, and then when she couldn’t run anymore, she walked and walked until she reached Meteor Falls. There, she thought if she waited, she could find her trainer again and prove to him that she was strong enough, he’d take her back. She finally tired of waiting there and made her way over to Rustboro City.
Miscellaneous: When (if) she meets Emil, she falls in love with the idea of becoming a Champion without a trainer, because she would be able to prove that she was good enough for her previous trainer without another trainer having a claim over her.
She refuses to be called Minnie, as that was her trainer’s special nickname for her and she doesn’t like to dwell on those painful memories. She still loves her trainer; she thinks it was her fault that she was released.
She wants to evolve, but doing so would require a Fire Stone, which she doesn’t have. However, she’s intent on evolving, so she’s always keeping an eye out for one – even if it would involve stealing to obtain it.