Reviews for Harry Potter and the Betrothal Contract
Epeefencer chapter 7 . 5/9
More of Ron acting totally out of character. It just isn't him.
Epeefencer chapter 4 . 5/9
Sorry, some of the dialogue you have have Ron says is just not in charater. Ron in canon is totally clueless. I just can't believe he would say these things.
Epeefencer chapter 10 . 5/6
Daphne needs to tell Harry about Draco knowing about them being outside of the ROR. That would let them know that it was Draco that was in the room. That's the only way that he could know about them meeting there.
Cipher301 chapter 7 . 4/30
I’ll see you at the gym Harry
Exxen chapter 1 . 4/15
Ohhh pobres almas en desgracia.
GeminiEyes chapter 26 . 4/7
Aww I love a happy ending
drezz master chapter 7 . 3/22
that's not weakness, everyone has a limit on how much they can handle, and is okay to have a breakdown.
jurmaev chapter 26 . 3/17
Really enjoyed this story, thanks for you work!
ThunderSphinx chapter 18 . 2/24
First off, the locket can only be opened via Parseltongue. Secondly, Regulus Black took the horcrux.
Daggerxxx chapter 2 . 2/23
Another Ice Queen. Another dissatisfaction, as if some kind of catastrophe had occurred. On the one hand, one could agree with this, but not against the backdrop of the tragedy of Potter's life. From this, the character of Daphne is simply unpleasant. As for the parents, so for Potter.
In addition, of course, neutral Greengrasses and other delights. Like neutrality is a good thing. Being neutral between victim and killer makes you no better than the latter.
Dayside chapter 4 . 2/14
God this is so teenagery it's hard to read as an adult. I get that they're teenagers so it's probably an accomplishment in writing but damn teenagers suck.
pix25 chapter 26 . 2/7
Beautiful story, loved it
Slowest Turtle chapter 6 . 1/24
Ugh it just keeps getting worse. He's such a whiny little bitch it's almost unbearable to read. Fuck right off.
Slowest Turtle chapter 5 . 1/24
This Harry is a total immature douche. Honestly, I feel bad for Daphne. If this prat was my future husband I would definitely kill myself.
geenakmom chapter 26 . 1/19
Really enjoyed reading your story! Happy to have found it.
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