Reviews for Harry Potter and the Betrothal Contract
Fox chapter 8 . 6/30
I understand that you’re going with the whole we’re just trying to help route with this and all that but you make Hermione hella pushy. Sometimes even your friends need to mind their own fucking business. The way Harry just rolls over in the end is absolutely infuriating. I also understand that this won’t really be seen, but I had to put it out there
csheila chapter 26 . 5/25
Such a great story

csheila chapter 25 . 5/25
Great scene
csheila chapter 23 . 5/25
If Fawkes drops Harry into battle they need to turn Dumbles into manure
csheila chapter 22 . 5/25
Oh well

He should have waited until the cup was gone
csheila chapter 20 . 5/25
Great discussions

I am a Harmony shipper but this Harry and Hermione would never work. She’s too rigid.

She needs somone equal to her intelligence and strong enough to butt heads. This means someone a little bit older (not Snape)
csheila chapter 16 . 5/25
Love it. I absolutely love it
csheila chapter 15 . 5/25
Fantastic twost ti canon
csheila chapter 14 . 5/25
She needs to contacther family

That’s what Harry lacked, experienced magicals who could protect him. Thanks to Molly he lost the Weasely family.
csheila chapter 13 . 5/25
She is in so much danger now
csheila chapter 12 . 5/25
Good job

Putting Hermione in her place will only help everyone in the future; especially Hermione
csheila chapter 10 . 5/25
At least you are not randomly dumbing down your characters.

csheila chapter 9 . 5/25
Tracey is a great character
csheila chapter 7 . 5/25
Harry has no business even being able to walk. He watched a minimum of two murders, killed a professor, suffered the torture curse, and afought a huge prehistoric typecreature. Canon was a sado masochistic orgry
csheila chapter 6 . 5/25
Well handled and she’s gone. Good
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